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  • the fallen.

    the fallen. (100)

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    I tried so hard to resist his charms but that was it, I crushed on him. But I told myself, it was a crush and a crush only. I couldn't deal with losing my independance to anyone.

    As I walked away, I was sure that was the last I'd see of him, ever but the next day he called and invited me for dinner. We talked for a while and we prepared for our first 'proper' date. The butterflies beat my stomach endlessly and my heart decided to become best friends with my throat but again, it was perfect and he was perfect.
    I love it!
    July 17th, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • red square

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    this line:

    something in the way he was so confident that drew me to him like a moth to a flame. I knew, I was going to be burnt tonight.

    is so brilliant. I really like this story. :D
    September 14th, 2008 at 07:45pm
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