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  • Hearts.and.Stars

    Hearts.and.Stars (100)

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    I really like the story!! hmm, suggestion? try going into Amity's point of view.. you know to kind of even it out, plus it helps understand her better.
    September 18th, 2008 at 04:16am
  • mothercow1

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    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    August 19th, 2008 at 04:13am
  • Madi sees in color!

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    nice story.

    i love the title, it's what caught my attention.
    ludo lyrics :)
    August 19th, 2008 at 01:33am
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