one: Sounds interesting. The only mistake that I saw *no help to spell-check; seeing as it thought some things were mistakes, but weren't* is the part is where you spelled it as thru when it's actually threw. *no offense though*.
Random: I'm the first to comment this story. By the way; name's Cyrene, but you can call me Cy *everyone else does*.
Random: I'm the first to comment this story. By the way; name's Cyrene, but you can call me Cy *everyone else does*.