Meaningless - Comments

Whoooa.

I really, really, really enjoyed this story. It's SO well written, and uniquely written with plenty of lovely, lovely words.

Thank you for entering, and letting me read this.

I apologize x1000 for taking so long to judge these. Go here for results.

I really like it, the conept i original, and I like how it is told in the killers perspective. Most stories are written from the victim. Good job.

Wow, your vocab was just... mind-blowing, really.

That was really good... But of course you'd already know that from all those other commenters. x]

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Wow, that was just so. . .awesome. I don't know what to say.

wow i cant believe it was just a english warm up lol

Thanks guys! :mrgreen:

This may become something else, I don't know yet.

The idea was that she had an abortion, because her work meant she couldn't be pregnant.

Wow. It's nice to see someone with a real grasp of the English language. You really know how to tell a story! I want more, if you planned on writing it. It's really wonderfully written.

Awesome.
It was REALLY good. Kinda sad at the ending. but gotta ask, did she kill her own kid, because that's what I got from it?

Please say this ISN'T a one-shot. It'd be fantastic if you carried this on, you could start it from the beginning. Tell us why she ended up being the prey instead of the predator?

hmm, I like this idea. And your use of language is very nice. XD Is this a one shot or is there more?

one point, I interpreted it as a 'life flashing before your eyes'. If this was what you intended, is the cutlery draw part of that flashback/in her mind or is she actually reaching into it? Minor confusion there.

The lines about the innocence I thought were fantastic. Simple, yet so effective in conveying the idea of a loss of innocence. I think the questioning is perfect for the character.
"When did I first loose my innocence? My first kill? My first kiss? Or was it further back in time than I could ever imagine?" <-- these lines.