Force of Nature - Comments

atrocious (100)

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I just sit and read this story and I must say it's simply amazing. I usually don't read too much on this site unless it's by my friends. I don't even know how I stumbled upon your story (it was in my old bookmarks for some reason). I really enjoyed it, and you did an amazing job at all the descriptions and details.

December 24th, 2011 at 05:04am

MissKrissy90 (100)

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Oh my goodness! I just finished it and it was amazing!
I'm off to the next one in the series!
<3

August 11th, 2010 at 06:28am

DragonxFox (100)

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In chapter 3, there was a small mistake. She was jumped over a root when she felt something hard tackle her from the side and she fell to the ground with a yelp.
Should be jumping. Action verbs =P

Here as well, She turned and started to talk away in her human form...
Should be walk away.... =]

I think you meant they, here: The heard the voices of the humans before they were in attacking distance of them.

December 27th, 2009 at 04:56am

AndItMovesUsAll (100)

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Wow i loved this so much! Im going to try and favourite it, but i dont even know if you can do that here because im more of a fp person. I think it started really well, it was an interesting beggining and i immediately wanted to know why she was so defiant against her brother and what situation their pack was in. In terms of werewolf stories, this is something quite different, with the idea of promiscuity in the pack and females heat, although i have to admit the heat was a little unclear at times, because at the beginning the twins were talking about which one would 'mount her first' so i was confused about whether the female has sex with more than one of them and if so hwo does she know which ones her mate. I really liked the feel of the pack even if we didnt get to know them that well, and loved all the scenes with her brother. The chemistry between her and Kale was great and i really wasnt sure what was going to happen because he didnt want a mate. I thouht that she was a bit mean to Rurik at the end there, i mean, i hated the fact that he plotted to have sex with her and thought it was perfectly alright, but he confessed to really liking her and she just screamed at him.
Apart from quite a few typos, which im sure you already know about i think thats it. I really enjoyed it and cant wait to read the sequel. :D

November 30th, 2009 at 08:22pm

Americana (100)

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Utterly awesome. I mean seriously - it's hard to find good ones on Mibba. Also, I'm amazed you trust enough to put an original story on the internet . I've got a few novels I'm having published this year, but I wouldn't put them on the internet :).

I'm going to check out your stories on your website now - keep up the good work girl, I'm impressed.

Love, Frangipani :)

November 25th, 2009 at 07:13am

Mrs.IeroWaySainthood (100)

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cant wait to read the sequal!

November 1st, 2009 at 06:10pm

SiNikkiSi (100)

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I started on this Thursday and got to 31, I didn't read any on Friday, and I finished today. :) Very wonderful work.

October 31st, 2009 at 07:52pm

debzxxx (660)

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wow! really good :)
i couldn't get onto your website... :S
cant wait till u post on the sequel :)

October 30th, 2009 at 11:47pm

just-smile (100)

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I just spent hours reading this story till the last updated and I can definitely say this is awesome. I really came to love Kale although he really is an ass for leaving.
I love how the story unfolds :D

October 30th, 2009 at 02:58pm