I liked it, but you lost me a couple of times in a few of the chapters cause you skipped around so i was like wt?!?!? did i miss something? Then I went back and checked and was like OoO skip around lolz.
But i get it.
Are Ever Night a real band or are those just lyrics you made up on your own? Cuase they were pretty good :D
saw--weet! cant wait till mext update. i wonder who the other watcher is and im i dont remeber who cammie is or if shes been in the story yet. so ill have to look back and see.
OMG IM SOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY I HAVENT UPDATED IN FOREVER. IF YOUR WONDERING WHY VISIT ALEXANDRA202 AND READ HER COMMENTS LOOK 4 GAARALOVER774 AND IT'LL SAY Y I HAVENT BEEN ABLE 2 BUT I AM GOING TO UPDATE TODAY
its ok, you'll probably be in the 6th or 7th chapter. thnx for the comment. ^___^ i'll make ur charecter awsome to. o and you have to tell me likea past about the vamps or deamons so i have a reason for you to fight ok??
haha ok. yes you kinda a half vamp/ watcher. you have the powers of a vamp adn can controll your self so when you go crazy your eyes turn eiterhblood red. or black they only go black when something really bad happens to like some1 close. say my person died. yuor eyes would go black wethr you wer pissed or not. if your eyes went red then some one just like insulted oyu or something.
I so totally agree with Alexandra on this one! And I LOVE my character!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D Am I a vampire? Eww. I dont wanna have to drink blood and all...but as long as I control the vampire in me if I am undead I'm good. GOD! How the fuck am I going to put you in my story now!? GAH!
P.S: Dead Heart Divine ends next chapter. Some very happy moments in it, by the way. :D
*tear* I think you're my most devoted fan, Sara. :`) It makes me happy that you think my stories are that good. In fact....*smirks* My next update is a fucking gore-fest. :D
ppl you HAVE to read my friend: Dark Passion Play's stories and songs they are AMAZING i loved reading them and i love them period, the stories rock some gory but hey thats what i like creepy cause i'm a girl and most girl's dont like blood lolz, songs. AMAZINGLY SICK!!! i loved the songs casue they were awsome read the one he wrote for my story:black heardted deamon. its on the tom sotry name on his profile. you people have to subscribe to his stories casue he is just an AMAZING and TALENTED writter
GUYS I GOT SOME KICK ASS IDEAD FOR THIS STORY. IM GOING TO UPDAE VERY SOON, IM GOING TO BE PUTTING IN MORE AND MORE CHARACTERS THO SO IF U WANNA BE IN IT, I PUT YOU IN THE STORY SO I NEED A GUY FR: JULIE (CAMMIE ENDS UP WITH BILL INSTEAD OF GUSTAV) I NEED A GIRL FOR: GEORG, GUSTAV (CAUSE TOM IS ANGEL'S MAN LOLZ) SO I NEED MORE PPL CAUSE IDK I CANT THINK OF ANY ONE ELSE LOLZ JUST MESSAGE ME WITH THE INFO ON WHAT YOU WANNA LOOK LIKE EXT. AND I'LL PUT YOU IN THE NEXT 2 TA 3 CHAPTER OK??!
wow.! love itt. its tite, sweet, narley, ratical, FUCKING OF THE CHIZAIN all together! lol im excited to read the next chapter. Skreams PLEASE LET THEM GET TOGETHER! ** well ima subscribe.
OOOH! May I write a song for this story, Sara!? I have a WICKED idea for an anthem! Mwhahahahaha. It fits Angel's demonic fighter image and plus she does have the ability to growl like a vampire god in the song......OOOH you'd love it. So is it a go?
Ok here's the deal: I will be your editor to make sure that Mibba never deletes this story because it kicks fucking ass. Black Hearted Demon.....OOOOH OH OOOH OOH! SONG! xD Hahaha.
Maybe Gerard's perverted in the head or something and kidnaps Angel but she kicks his ass worse than Julie's? Then she never forgives Tom until Gerard goes after HIM, therefore she taps his shoulder, uses a VERY witty insult then punches him unconscious, AFTER which saying a VERY witty comeback. :)
YES: i did just call you an AMAZING writter, SICK: gory-ass-fight between ydia and Drake ^_^, and SURE: tom Kaulitz series please, if not that then,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,gerard way please
I could be the editor you know. I think if someone helped you, Mibba wouldn't delete it. And hold the fucking phone:
You did not just call me an amazing story writer..... :mrgreen:
You deserve a new update. With a MEGA-gory fight between Lydia and Drake. *smirks* When I say gory, I mean throat-ripped-out gory. *laughs* You'll LOVE it. In fact....I think I may just write you a series. Pick a celebrity you like. ANY one and I will write one for you. You can even make up the plot. :D