Unravel - Comments

ah, finally!
haha its funny in english we're talking about the paths that the hero takes to become a hero....but if they refuse the "call," which is the opportunity to go on an adventure, then they're pushing away opportunities for maturing and stuff.
good job!

Woot! Like the new chapter. Hmm, I wonder what Watson wants to see her for...? :D

well, yes, it's a little choppy, but the ideas are great. i really like it. too bad it's not a real book, because you'd have a buyer *points to self*
i want more. now. lol take your time, but it'd be nice to know what happens next.

I'm right in the middle of writing the first chapter. There's just a little bit more to it but maybe when I'm done, I can add chapter 2!

I'm glad everyone likes it. The next one is coming soon. Promise! :P

I wanna read! There's no chapter yet! You're kinda killing me here!!!

I like it and would enjoy more, please. :)

grr why isnt there a chapter one???? i wanna read! you're killing me with the suspense here!
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Yeah, the prologue got me interested!
I want more! Please?

i love it, please write more.
it's really good
bye

Well, I'm definately interested. I love it! Write more!