"Ullvyoo" - Comments

it's so cute, you should continued this fic, it's so potential
what happened next, it make me think crazy 'bout that. . .
>.<
it's so adorable.
love it.
thank you for sharing >.<

Please, forgive me for this little outburst I'm about to have.

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Ullvyoo? SRSLY? That is so adorable!
Oh wow, I was so glad to find this.
I'm a huge sucker for Cookleta, and I'm glad someone as talented as you wrote one.
I can't really form comprehensive words right now because I'm basking in the fluff.
Very, very well done.

Hey Hey.
So wow.

Seriously, gimme a minute to just adjust because oh Jan, this was beautiful.

I love your characterisations. Because we all know Archie has some hidden personality and Cook is just a wonderful sarcastic man sometimes.

I love the flowing dialogue especially nearing the end although that hurt a bit.
And Cook's train of thoight was very well written. It made him take on the role of the responsible one and I liked that so much. Gosh, the setting, the closely realted canon information, its allvery believeable.

And at the end, "Ullvyoo" :cute: Oh wow, did I blush like crazy. Because it was such a cute moment and painful too but I'm currently speechless. Its a great job Jan.
:arms:

Seriously, write more.
I'll stalk you for your writing.

Awwwwww. That was so cute.
It's awesomely written as well , it just had me smiling the whole way through. The dialogue especially , it was simple , but effective.
Well done , that was brilliant.