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  • anytime you want

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    Amazing. Wow
    I'd be really interested to see you write a chapterred Ger-Z or something. Neh, just a thought :tehe:
    March 4th, 2009 at 02:49pm
  • neonbluepunk

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    LOL That was hilarious! XD
    January 31st, 2009 at 04:47pm
  • Rachii!

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    This was cuteee ^^
    September 6th, 2008 at 06:02pm
  • Remus J. Lupin

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    HAHAHAA you make me laugh honey xD
    I love your writing!

    JIMMY FOR PRESIDENT! =D
    ah no fair, I wanted to be minister of ninja slash pranking what not xD

    loved it! xoxo
    August 30th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • Kays2301

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    Hahaha XD
    That made me laugh. GO LOU! Lou should be the minister of all things kinkeh :)
    Loved it hun =]
    xxx
    August 24th, 2008 at 01:47pm
  • Laceration Gravity

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    In Love James!!!!!! :cute: :arms:

    I loved it Wow Only one or two grammar/spelling errors as far as I could see and a great plotline. But aww, why did he have to wake up? :XD
    August 24th, 2008 at 11:52am
  • Mindless Lauren

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    I absolutley loved the idea of them taking over the whitehouse, I would actually move to the USMSI purely because it would be different and kind of weird. I just generally loved this and it made me laugh through out =))
    August 24th, 2008 at 11:30am
  • Sarahnade.

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    I loved this!
    Nicely written, and nothing like i've read before.

    This is 'the sharpest lives.' from INO, btw.
    =D
    August 23rd, 2008 at 09:59pm
  • Cherry Road

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    STUPID MIBBA FOR HAVING A DATABASE ERROR WHEN I WAS TRYING TO COMMENT.

    And...:lmfao.
    Just :lmfao.
    Because I couldn't stop laughing.
    :XD

    A few capitalization and grammar mistakes, but nothing too huge. ^_^ I'll PM you everything I found wrong if you want me to. :]

    ANYWAYS, loved the NML character inserts. Even though I previewed them. :tehe: They still made me laugh hystercially, probably more than BJ being the minister of white asses. :XD

    And oooooooh, Chantal's maaaaaaaad. :lmfao

    Loved it, hon. THANK YOU FOR SAVING ME FROM THE SHITTY FANFICTION THAT I WAS READING EARLIER TODAY. :mrgreen:
    August 23rd, 2008 at 09:40pm
  • plu

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    OMG LIGHT YAGAMI!!!

    I knew this would rock when you told me the idea!
    August 23rd, 2008 at 09:19pm
  • Robin Sparkles

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    x]

    It's a shame he actually woke up, though. :think: Although the thought of them actually taking over makes me laugh...
    August 23rd, 2008 at 09:11pm
  • fool's paradise

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    That was... strange, I must say.
    And not to sound like a know-it-all, but the White House walls aren't actually entirely white. That's just the exterior.
    August 23rd, 2008 at 09:06pm