Heart of Crime - Comments

silk tea. (400)

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I agree with the commenter above.
I feel like this is a bit all over the place.
But maybe it all ties together in the end?

July 9th, 2010 at 03:06am

Monster of Society (100)

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Good story, but it seems like the setting jumps around a lot, try to make sure it's clear to readers.

November 28th, 2009 at 03:01am

Cereal Killer (100)

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BUMP

November 30th, 2008 at 08:23am

Cereal Killer (100)

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Great job, very original and well-written.

November 30th, 2008 at 06:06am

st.switchblade (100)

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I finally updated
Sorry it took so damn long

November 7th, 2008 at 02:38am

st.switchblade (100)

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Thanks :)

September 13th, 2008 at 09:41pm

Paranoid-Victim (100)

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This story leaves me with a lot of questions (which is a good thing) about what's going to happen next. I love how your wrting style is...very descriptive but not over the top...I wonder if Mr. Drug Dealer is going to get caught? Can't wait for chapter 2.

September 7th, 2008 at 02:01am

Paranoid-Victim (100)

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seems interesting. I'd read the next chapter...*subscribes*

August 24th, 2008 at 01:08am

st.switchblade (100)

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Comments?

August 24th, 2008 at 12:36am