My Secret Untold - Comments

I still can't help but smile everytime I read when Sydney's heart keeps beating quicker when Alex is around. I always melt at that part. Haha. I also love when she's like, we're bonded?! And she doesn't even care about it.

Chapter 14-- Wow! I LOVED this chapter. It really enhanced the first story in my opinion since we never really know what truly happened with the whole Alex/Cacie thing. Seriously, this was a great chapter. I adored it. I can't wait for more.

Chapter 13-- Aw, crud. So I'm reading this chapter, and I'm getting closer and closer to the ending, and I'm like c'mon! Change the plot. Just do it. Do it! haha, except you didn't change the plot. Except hm.... Alex is knocked out...

Chapter 12-- Ha, I was wondering why there were sewing machines... And aw, that was sweet when Alex was like, "I had given her hope." =]. Cute!

Chapter 11-- Ha, of course I liked this chapter. It was great like usual. Ha, I wonder what Cacie really IS thinking... that would be interesting. Ha, anyways... very well written yet again. (Not like I excepted anything less.)

Chapter 10-- Another great chapter. Sorry, short review, school in the morning unfortuantely.

Chapter 9-- Ha, I'm glad you like writing in Alex's point of view. =]. Haha. I just adore the conversations between Alex and Sydney in their brains. They're hilarious!

Chapter 8-- Ha, of course I liked it. I loved this chapter like usual. =]. haha, well I guess in this story we learn about Caycie's evilness a little bit earlier on. Or at least Alex is somewhat hinting at it.

Chapter 7-- Ha, I'm still trying to figure out HOW exactly Alex got Sydney's parents to agree. Great chapter though, still..

Chapter 6-- Loved this one as well. Sorry, got to keep it short. Darn homework...

Chapter 5-- Aw, Alex seems so sweet. So concerned for Sydney. That's a great side to see of him.

Chapter 3/4-- Ha, that was easy to follow, don't worry. I didn't know Alex's friend was in the band Green with Envy that Sydney likes... Ha, I learned something new. =].

omg! its soo goodd haha lol keep writing soon =] i loveee twilight series im soo addiected to it i beg mi sister to buy me a calender of twilight and a tshirt of them too at hot topic that the only store they sell haha lol i talk to much lol

I really like this story. It really makes things a lot clearer because sometimes you were just like 'I wonder what Alex is thinking as Sydney does this'. Some parts actually make a lot more sense now. And sorry for not reading this earlier, ha, I've had a VERY busy week. Oh, and thanks for your comment on my stories, I'm glad you liked them. =]. Look for the sequel tonight... Anyways, great first beginning chapter. I can't wait to read more!

omgg it is totally a awesomeness idea to narrate in Alex ways hahaha loll