Called Her For The First Time Yesterday - Comments

Love it completely. :)
Joe was such a PUNK in this chapter oh my god.
If I was Ari I would've punched him right in the jaw for telling me he was going on world tour the day before they were leaving.
That's so fucked up, my jaw was dropped the entire time I was reading the chapter.
Your an amazing author, I wanna be like you when I grow up! Lol. :D

Amazing Update, poor Ari.
Joe is a bitch. :)

omg I cant believe he was such a jerk
I cant wait to see what happens in the sequel!

I can't believe that happened. That's insane!!! I love this story. Onward to the sequel. Dun duh duh dahhhhh!

*gasps and falls back on her bed*
Oh my gosh. Too many fights and yelling and such for my innocent brain to process.
I can't believe this happened. I really reallly really really want to hate Joe right now. So much like you won't believe it.
But, as much as I hate to say this, I knoww Ariabella still loves him.
And I can see whyy.
Stupid Chelsea and the world tour.
But anywho.
This has been an INCREDIBLE story.
I seriously don't know what I would do without it ^.^
I'm so glad there's a sequel!
You are an amazing writer!

Holy Mother of Steak and Potatoes! (I'm hungry)

That chapter was abosolutly 100% amazatasticdid. (Amazing, fantastic and splendid.)

Yes, it was short...but like you said, it all flowed really well together and my heart was beating so hard when Joe just walked away from her and said that last line.

What a superb way to end it Hil.

My gosh woman...you never cease to amaze me every time you update or write anything, and I swear, that book tour....TOTALLY going to happen. I got the flip camera so we can make some wacky videos on the bus and you'll have your amazing book out and...ah...it'll be great!

But anways, back to your update for the LAST CHAPTER!

I think, me, other than you, know how excited you are about finishing this one so you can start the seqeul which is giong to be like....200 times better than this one. Not saying that this story isn't amazaling because it is, it's like....200 times better than any other story that I read, but your sequel...it's going to have so much more depth to it now that all the characters are bonded and have a connection with each other and AHHH! I can't wait.

This was literally the most perfect way to end this and keep everyone guessing and wanting more until your done with the sequel! GAH!

You simply write amazing and I can't wait until one day I'm teaching your book to my kids...not my kids, but my kids at school. It's gonna be amazing! : )

-BAM!- girl is talking to you on aim and typing this up at the same time and really can't get over that it's over with but excited for the sequel at the same time! AHHHHH!

Holy Mother of Steak and Potatoes! (I'm hungry)

That chapter was abosolutly 100% amazatasticdid. (Amazing, fantastic and splendid.)

Yes, it was short...but like you said, it all flowed really well together and my heart was beating so hard when Joe just walked away from her and said that last line.

What a superb way to end it Hil.

My gosh woman...you never cease to amaze me every time you update or write anything, and I swear, that book tour....TOTALLY going to happen. I got the flip camera so we can make some wacky videos on the bus and you'll have your amazing book out and...ah...it'll be great!

But anways, back to your update for the LAST CHAPTER!

I think, me, other than you, know how excited you are about finishing this one so you can start the seqeul which is giong to be like....200 times better than this one. Not saying that this story isn't amazaling because it is, it's like....200 times better than any other story that I read, but your sequel...it's going to have so much more depth to it now that all the characters are bonded and have a connection with each other and AHHH! I can't wait.

This was literally the most perfect way to end this and keep everyone guessing and wanting more until your done with the sequel! GAH!

You simply write amazing and I can't wait until one day I'm teaching your book to my kids...not my kids, but my kids at school. It's gonna be amazing! : )

-BAM!- girl is talking to you on aim and typing this up at the same time and really can't get over that it's over with but excited for the sequel at the same time! AHHHHH!

OMFG!!! Amazing Story!! I made an account here just for this story!! Luv it to death. Please Update!

***Joe is such an ass in the last chapter*** HAHA

I'm not going to like what's going to happen?
MONKEYFUCKSHITBANANAS!
I love this story, and when I read this part I was like JOSEPH!
WHYYY! I mean, he loves her...so much.
I don't want this story to be sad :(
Oh welll...update soon?

EDIT:
I just read Stephanie's post above...WTF?
WHY IS HE SO DEFENSIVE?!?!?!?!?!!?
I mean, I understood all the Foreshadowing things...but...I didn't say them...
:P
Joe is a stupid little assy boy.

DAMN the girl above me! Not once have I started off a page with one of my comments. Grr!

Anyhooter, onto my comment.

HOLY POTATOES AND GRAVY!

That was so good. Granted again, you read the first half to me over the phone, but still, oh my gosh, reading it definantly made it ten times better. And even though it took me so dang long to read it, it was totally worth the wait. Totally!

So....I completely understand about what you said about the whole 'hint' talk. Geez....to me.....whatever your planning, even though I already know what it is, but still....since I picked up on all the little hints, I wouldn't be to shocked when you finally wrote about it. Gah..people these days. lol

First forshadowing hint was Joe and his talk about how he feels like a dick for always looking at other girls. Even though he window shops and doesn't cheat, except that one time with Taylor, but still....that should be a clear give away that something might happen.

And boy oh boy, did I want to smack him across the face when he made that comment about how at one point it felt so right to be with Taylor and yet he came back to Ari. I think Joe just won the 'Talking out of my Ass' award. Geez....stupid boy!

Oh....and another little tidbit that I picked up on with Ari saying that she's not going to take Joe back every time he messes up...foreshadowing, my friend? I think so! : )

And oh my gosh...I couldn't get over how much Steph in the story and myself are so much alike...I mean...besides the fact that it's based off of me but still...her reaction was the same as mine last night when you told me over the phone what Joe was yelling at Ari about. I couldn't get over that. I think it's safe to say you know me better than I know myself. lol

And I'm greatly shocked that nobody ever even commented or asked about Steph's statement.

"Why would he get so defensive?"

I mean, hello?! Did everybody just freaking miss that little question...that should at least get them all wondering, "Why would he get so defensive?" Geezie peasies.....I want to kill everyone who reads this and isn't picking up on anything. Grr....

Wow....if you get hate mail for whatever little thing your going to throw in there, I got your back when you say, "Well I wrote a lot of hints in there, you were just too stupid to see it!" Gah!

I can't believe how upset I'm getting and it's not even my story, but seriously, those little hints are as clear as the head on your shoulders for crying out loud. Seriuosly, Steph's statement alone should have got everyone wondering. Oh sweet baby jesus.

Anyways, you simply blew me away, yet again and this is definatly one of your best chapters...even though ever chapter is one of you best chapters. I don't think you could ever write a bad one even if you tried. lol

I love it and I can't wait for more...and for someone else besides myself to pick up on something!

-Your very upste BAM! girl because no one is smart enough to at least think twice about everything...and the fact that it's snowing....again here in Wisco. Maybe you'll get your wish for when you come in 46 days!

OMG PLEASE UPDATE IM ADDICTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Great update.

=O
Serina was pregnant when she died?!
Holy cow crap!
I almost cried when Joe and Ari fought... =T

More soon, please, please, please.
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i really like this! update soon please~

omg aww :(

omg. this keeps getting worse and worse for Ari.
this is like worse than hell on earth. so much worse.
and that fight, omg i was getting so scared cuz i could picture it also.
i'm anxious for the next chapter!

Oh. My. Goodness.
That is by far my favorite chapter. I started crying when Joe took Ari in his arms and started to cry. And at the end...oh my goodness. You should have seen my face. It was like, a look of shock mixed with someone who was about to cry...again!
Why must you do this to me?! I didn't start reading stories so I could cry, but I love it.

I wanna cry..but I don't want eyeliner running down my face...
so Serina was pregnant?
That makes it so so much worse...

Oh my gosh, I love this story!
Ari and Steph are such amazing friends.
I hope she gets up, out of bed soon.

More soon!
(:

I'm glad your back (:
That's so sad...
Update soon?