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  • SynfulKisses

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    I love the video you based this on. I watch it all the time. It just makes me happy.....

    But this story is awesome. Though with as drunk as Brian was I'm surprised he could form a coherent thought, well guess it's true what they say men only think with one part of their anatomy, huh? I love smut, esp Brian smut, so that was rather satisfying, and I'll forgive him for thinking with the wrong head....for now. lol
    March 19th, 2011 at 03:40pm
  • i_love_to_syn

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    Two words: fucking hot.
    February 27th, 2009 at 01:35am
  • bloodravyn

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    kickass
    February 26th, 2009 at 05:18am
  • The Dodger

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    ...I could've sworn I commented on this before....huh.
    Oh well I'm commenting now! :XD
    I saw the link to this in the authors note in For Reasons Unknown and had to come check this out. Turns out I had already read this one a while ago whist waiting for other updates from you but hadn't left a comment! Oops
    Gha but I loved this one too.
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    “And you are?” she whispered back.

    “Incredibly horny” he mumbled causing Charlie to giggle “sorry, I’m Synyster Gates”
    That had to be my favorite part in the whole thing! :lmfao
    February 24th, 2009 at 04:44am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    Loved this. Found the first part hilarious and the next part extremely hot.
    February 9th, 2009 at 04:36pm
  • D. Dixon

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    dude, that was awesome!
    i loved it!
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:29pm
  • our avenged tania.

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    It's just... ;]]]]
    November 21st, 2008 at 02:59am
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    I loved it. You really are a fantastic writer.
    October 24th, 2008 at 04:53am
  • Audrey T

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    I just read your journal about peeps not commenting so I decided to check out your story. I got to be honest. I didn't finish reading this. For me it's nearly impossible to read something (especially a piece that's so long) when it isn't spaced. It's real hard on the eyes.

    So if you ever do re-re-edit and put spaces between your paragraphs, please drop a comment on my profile and I'll be more than glad to read it and post a real comment.
    October 13th, 2008 at 01:24am
  • Fast_Melodic

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    thank you for changing it =)
    and sorry for freaking out so much :tehe:
    its really good, keep going
    August 27th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    Aw I really liked that. It was beyond funny when all of them where drunk and trying to flirt with her. But the end made it brilliant! :tehe:
    That was really well written. Clap
    Thanks for the comment - I wish more people would leave their critisims - good or bad - it all goes to making me a better writer :)
    August 27th, 2008 at 09:22pm
  • the-vampiress-angel

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    Aw I really liked that. It was beyond funny when all of them where drunk and trying to flirt with her. But the end made it brilliant! :tehe:
    That was really well written. Clap
    August 27th, 2008 at 08:32pm
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