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  • silentaffections

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    FUCK, YES! I finished reading all of the Prequel (finally--at 12:58 in the morn.!) And now I'm off to sleep. But it was good. I wish there were more details, though, of course. One can never forget the details! I DID have quite a few critiques, but ah is too tieyed! (tie-ed)
    January 27th, 2009 at 07:00am
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    Wilson: The story line wasn't that bad; it could've made more sense, but. . . .Rachel: I think the verbiage could've been better... Wilson: the way you told the story took away from ...the way you told the story could've been better. Because I didn't understand what was going on. Okay, I'm done now. I'm not just saying this because I dislike you...this is just "constructive criticism."
    January 26th, 2009 at 10:29pm
  • Naked_Freedom

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    No, no. It was "Calm down, Malia." because Malia was scolding Selene.
    January 26th, 2009 at 09:57pm
  • silentaffections

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    Chapter5: Ooh, sizzle, sizzle...
    January 26th, 2009 at 09:08pm
  • silentaffections

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    Chapter3: You wrote: "Calm down, Malia" or should it have been "Calm down, Selene," instead?
    January 26th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • silentaffections

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    Oh, my...God. Alright, alright, I'll admit it-- I was only looking through your junk and saw just so HAPPENED to look into this one as well. And I just HAPPENED to look into one random chapter, and I accidentally got hooked. Now, it was only one random chapter, but I have a strong feeling that this oozes with romance, and I'll be savoring each damned chapter. *sigh* Duhmit! >.<
    January 10th, 2009 at 05:53am
  • Derpina.

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    Well Selene is being silly now... What about Draco? :(

    More soon? =)
    December 22nd, 2008 at 08:38am
  • Derpina.

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    Hey this story is awesome! I can't believe you don't have more comments...

    Update soon please? Smiley
    December 20th, 2008 at 10:58am
  • mintaaay!?

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    ahh This is sooo good! Keep writingg!!!
    i L O V E it!
    November 21st, 2008 at 07:16am
  • Naked_Freedom

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    Thank you so much!
    We'll be posting more pretty soon! :D
    November 2nd, 2008 at 04:37am
  • xxDevonnyElizabethxx

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    hey this is really good keep writing!
    October 31st, 2008 at 02:27am
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