I Could Always Make You Smile - Comments

silentaffections (150)

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FUCK, YES! I finished reading all of the Prequel (finally--at 12:58 in the morn.!) And now I'm off to sleep. But it was good. I wish there were more details, though, of course. One can never forget the details! I DID have quite a few critiques, but ah is too tieyed! (tie-ed)

January 27th, 2009 at 07:00am

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Wilson: The story line wasn't that bad; it could've made more sense, but. . . .Rachel: I think the verbiage could've been better... Wilson: the way you told the story took away from ...the way you told the story could've been better. Because I didn't understand what was going on. Okay, I'm done now. I'm not just saying this because I dislike you...this is just "constructive criticism."

January 26th, 2009 at 10:29pm

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No, no. It was "Calm down, Malia." because Malia was scolding Selene.

January 26th, 2009 at 09:57pm

silentaffections (150)

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Chapter5: Ooh, sizzle, sizzle...

January 26th, 2009 at 09:08pm

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Chapter3: You wrote: "Calm down, Malia" or should it have been "Calm down, Selene," instead?

January 26th, 2009 at 08:29pm

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Oh, my...God. Alright, alright, I'll admit it-- I was only looking through your junk and saw just so HAPPENED to look into this one as well. And I just HAPPENED to look into one random chapter, and I accidentally got hooked. Now, it was only one random chapter, but I have a strong feeling that this oozes with romance, and I'll be savoring each damned chapter. *sigh* Duhmit! >.<

January 10th, 2009 at 05:53am