Run Baby Run - Comments

I'm still reading it XDD
I like it :3

im not sdone with it yet but i do like it very much! ur stories are amazing u should become a famous author! ur books would be the only books i ever read! :)

yeahhh, im still reading it too...
although i have stopped reading everything else on here lol...
♥
its a good story...

Yar, I be reading it =]

Hope he takes her back

bracelet is a sweet idea

I agree. Good story, good plot. Time to to a spelling/Grammar check... very good though
~Ray

beneath eleven stars:

here, i'll give you constructive critism.
no sugarcoating and what not.

1) Good Story. Good Plot.

2) Your Grammar, Punctuation, Basic Story Set Up Is Kind Of Bad.

You need to work on how you work on your story. The whole 'layout' of the story is kind of bad and most people would stop reading after finding out how you wrote it. Oh and you don't put capitals after the " and you really need too.

Thankyou

here, i'll give you constructive critism.
no sugarcoating and what not.

1) Good Story. Good Plot.

2) Your Grammar, Punctuation, Basic Story Set Up Is Kind Of Bad.

You need to work on how you work on your story. The whole 'layout' of the story is kind of bad and most people would stop reading after finding out how you wrote it. Oh and you don't put capitals after the " and you really need too.

You're story is pretty cool.
It's great ^_^

Hey.
It was actually a pretty good story, mostly because I can totally relate to it. We moved when I was seven. But that's not important right now. This is all about you.
It was very interesting, has a hook. Although, there are grammer and spelling errors that should be fixed.
My old teacher told me that "if there are more than three errors it will look like the writter doesn't care about what he or she is doing and it will leave the reader bored and the reader will probably move to a different story."
Plus, the mods don't like that kind of stuff.
Fix that and you're golden.
I love the title by the way.
Please read my story! PLEASE!