I realised that i havent read this story before its sad but i read all u have so far n it took me an hour n 33 minutes to do so and i have to say i LOVE it!! butt you need to update like pronto because the last part yeah if joe hadn't shown up then well idk! but i know SOMETHING juicy was going to happen! it couldn't have NOT happened if he hadn't shown up... :D:D:D:D haha yeah i go crazy with your stories gurly i actually lost myself in the story i forgot it was a fan fic on mibba lol thats good that means its like FAN-TAB-BOO-LYS!!! haha i have weird ways of spelling things lol love yeas n im SO subscribing!!
I totally thought that they were going to kiss! They were so close! awww....I think that it's gonna happen eventually....it's inevitable. That was a really good update! Please continue!
:D :D :D :D! i love this story and now i subscribed. :))! YAY! moreeeeeeeee pleaseeeee, Dormouse!! (steal that name, people, and Pete the BAD ASS vampy will come in your house adn kls;oglklasiel you! make sense of THAT.) XD
Ooh, the new hair cut sounds awesome, She's gotta be pretty talented to get results like that on the first try ^-^ That nightmare made me shudder, that's just plain creepy. He he, I'm glad Andy made the decision. Everyone elses astonishment was funny XD More soon?
Sorry, girly, I just realized you had updated this. All my Mibba emails keep getting sent to spam....But I'm commenting now!
Pete lurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrves her. And ewwwie, hood vamps. Hate those type. Anyhow, this was a lovely update, AND I WANT HARDCORE PETE ACTION IN THE NEXT ONE. Geez, you almost make me like the dude....
awh, i love this <33333 although its funn because elle and i share the same name, and occasionally i get confused by myself =P and is it just me or has the background changed from when i last read it?
Wow, I love the story! You're a very talented writer, that's for sure. He he, I'd be very annoyed to have Pete in MY head, I feel sorry for Elle >.< More soon? -subscribes-
Fascinating. You write really beautifully. I specialize in (bad) humor, not the lovely descriptions and good characterations you put in your stories.
WHAT?!? ONLY FOUR COMMENTS?!? Shame, shame, shame....We must remedy that! More people should read this, if only because it's a wonderful piece of literature, let alone a freaking sweet fan fic!
ah, i love this <33 I love Billiams in this, he's so darn evil <3333 Really, if you have cons, who needs any other shoes? ~ too true =D although I doubt mine will fit over my foot because it's all swollen Xl more soon?
its sad
but i read all u have so far n it took me an hour n 33 minutes to do so and i have to say i LOVE it!!
butt you need to update like pronto because the last part yeah if joe hadn't shown up then well idk! but i know SOMETHING juicy was going to happen! it couldn't have NOT happened if he hadn't shown up... :D:D:D:D
haha yeah i go crazy with your stories gurly
i actually lost myself in the story i forgot it was a fan fic on mibba lol
thats good that means its like FAN-TAB-BOO-LYS!!!
haha i have weird ways of spelling things lol
love yeas
n im SO subscribing!!