The Father You Should Be - Comments

  • Flowerr

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    Wow, I totally loved this story till the end!!!
    Very cute ending by the way!!!
    <3
    December 17th, 2008 at 02:23am
  • Sophy-Marie

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    Awwwh! Tht was sooo cute.
    I proper laughed at the 'wrestling' and fucking bit.
    Kids :D

    I'm glad it all got worked out and stuff.
    I'll miss this story.
    xxx
    November 30th, 2008 at 08:54pm
  • SynysterRose

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    epilogue!!!!
    November 22nd, 2008 at 11:28pm
  • BurnedOutPixels

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    Love your story and I rly hope u do a epilogue
    November 22nd, 2008 at 05:45am
  • celiaeatsballz

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    please please PLEASE continue this, I loved it :]
    November 22nd, 2008 at 04:47am
  • House_of_Syn

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    EPILOGUE...!!..AND THAT MADE ME CRY.
    that was really good.
    November 22nd, 2008 at 03:52am
  • musicxsavesxlives

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    you should write an epilogue!! please!
    November 22nd, 2008 at 01:28am
  • Krista-Snaps

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    That was sad...but I'm glad that Brian finally stepped up.
    November 21st, 2008 at 11:33pm
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    That was heartbreaking. You have to do the epilogue. PLEASE!
    November 21st, 2008 at 10:05pm
  • Takamasa Ishihara.

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    Ohmygod, poor Seb! D:
    Please, make an epilogueeeee!
    November 21st, 2008 at 09:26pm
  • givexmexaxreason

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    YES!!! PLEASE MAKE AN EPILOGUE! I want to make sure Seb's alright.
    November 21st, 2008 at 08:22pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Oh god, epilogue pleaseee
    :)
    November 21st, 2008 at 08:12pm
  • astro.zombie.dee

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    bah sad.
    November 21st, 2008 at 08:35am
  • silentwhispers

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    my heart aches for seb... it really does.. i want to beat the guy or girl whatever who took seb to a pulp!!! seriously!
    update soon please!!
    November 21st, 2008 at 12:43am
  • SurfSkittles

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    awww poor seb! that was heartbreaking. maybe brian will come to his senses finally.
    November 20th, 2008 at 11:59pm
  • House_of_Syn

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    OH MY GOD
    How can someone do that to a little baby...???
    That made me almost cry
    and thats bullshit that seb has to be hurt for him to feel some emotion for him.
    oh god...UPDATE SOON!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 11:45pm
  • tiffanydarlingxo

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    loveee it :]
    November 20th, 2008 at 11:14pm
  • Forever--Young

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    Poor Seb, but at least he's alive.
    And it's kinda terrible that Brian's own child has to pratically dead for him to show the slightest bit of compassion
    November 20th, 2008 at 09:11pm
  • Sophy-Marie

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    *sniffs*
    OMG! Poor poor ickle Seb!
    It sucks how Seb has to be in such a state for Brian to actually feel some compassion.
    I love this story though :D
    xxx
    November 20th, 2008 at 08:57pm
  • House_of_Syn

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!
    I just read it yesterday and Im in love.
    plz update again!. I have a feeling that seb is dead..so plz make it go away!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 06:05pm