In the Orchard - Comments

thank you guyss (:

i know...hmm..i read it and then i was like...wow its kinda...quick.
i'll probably go edit it later (:
thanks so much for commenting though

I agree with The McCrackhead...it does sound a little rushed..
but amazing otherwise...

I loved her feelings added into everything. It made is so much more believeable. X]

Aww, this is sweet [:
Although, you should have elaborated more since it sounds like the story is rushed.
Nonetheless, it's good.