Don't Go, Please Stay - Comments

Alright. First off, hello :)

Now, I admit, I saw All Time Low and I was like, "Ugh." I don't listen to the music and I knew nothing about them, so I never read the fics. Normally I can't keep myself reading them either.

But you see, I read it. And I couldn't take my eyes off it. It was really good, your writing style pleases me, your layout doesn't kill my eyes, you seemed to plan it well (Unless you are like me and don't plan, you just type. In that case you went for it, well. Haha). It was completely enjoyable and cute.

Just one thing, and it might just be me, but the last two paragraphs seemed a bit forced and a little rushed. I just didn't seem to flow like the rest of your story. But it didn't turn me off one bit.

Good job. You wrote a wonderful story. Hope you don't mind I recommended it ;)

So I will admit that when I first saw that this was an All Time Low fanfiction, I made a face. I usually avoid this fandom, simply because I've had bad experiences with the fiction, but I was very pleasantly surprised with this piece. There is a very lovable, playful, and upbeat atmosphere to this story, and it doesn't seem forced at all. I really enjoyed reading it, and I think that this is a job very well done.

powerMOREx:

Ryan was probably a hunk, too :-P
<3

Haha, I based him off my then-crush.
And yeah, he is. ;]

haha it was VERY well written ;)
Ryan was probably a hunk, too :-P

<3

i could have sworn i commented this when i read it...
but i love it =]
very cute lol