Happily Ever After Means Nothing to You, Doesn't It? - Comments

  • catwohim

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    Omfg what?????!!!! The end fbfifnfjgifjfbjdkdj the heck. Grrr woman I want more. Altho being a mom I don't know how in the world I would ever leave my kid god that's so sad. Can like in the next one it would be interesting and a slap in everyone's face if rosie turns out to be not human like u kno how its once in a blue moon a girl is a werewolf something like that or a witch and she dosent get her powers till later on.
    May 26th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • Lady.V.

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    I loved it <3
    August 16th, 2011 at 04:27pm
  • lalalalala:-D

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    again im a little late but i think Kegan
    January 4th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    Definetly fourth installment :D
    I do like the idea of that title...but how about something that links back to the first title of "How Could This Happen To Me"...something like..."How did this happen to us"...or "How Could This Be The End.." I have no idea...they're both pretty awful, but maybe...something like that? On the hand...I do like the idea of the title you suggested....I dunno...just a suggestion :D
    January 4th, 2010 at 03:03pm
  • Morpheus

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    Awh :(
    The ending was so damn sad!
    I can't believe you finished the story while i've been awol!
    anyway, really, really sad, and slightly unexpected ending!
    Loved it :)
    xx
    March 20th, 2009 at 01:16pm
  • nalajess

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    I have a title idea :)

    what about: I Miss You, I Need You, I Cry For You.

    idk, i like the way its sounds, and it can go for all the characters maybe.
    March 19th, 2009 at 09:23pm
  • not mohawks; robots

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    i like the ending because it's a cliffhanger, i cant wait for the sequal!
    :D
    March 19th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    aghh maddie is horrible!! you cant just leave a kid on someone elses doorstep!! and abandon everyone!! grrrrrrrr.... i kinda liked the ending except now i cant wait for the trilogy.

    what about "Heading for the hills" for a title?
    or "head to head: a sibling rivalry"
    March 19th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    Oh :) That was actually quite a sad ending, briliantly written, but still :(
    I like the text message Kegan sent to T.J, it showed that he did care, and did understand Maddie.
    I cannot wait for the third story :)
    March 19th, 2009 at 09:49am
  • Shade and Honey

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    I personally liked the ending and i love the trilogy so far. I can't wait for the next story.
    March 19th, 2009 at 02:58am
  • Katie_Bugs

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    Nooo!!!
    It cannot be the fucking end!!!

    But as you said you didnt want death threts. So I won't send you one!!

    But DAMN YOU!!!!! :evil:
    March 19th, 2009 at 02:15am
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    :o she is sending Rosie off....and she's what..leaving?
    Ahh this is too good!
    Last chapter - Can't wait for it!
    March 18th, 2009 at 09:21pm
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    Can't wait for the last two chapters...It will be sad to say goodbye to Maddie and Kegan and T.J. though!
    Brilliant chapter, as always!
    More soon :)
    Oh and I loved the last couple of lines :)
    March 18th, 2009 at 09:02am
  • predigree13

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    LOVE it. thats about all there is to say.
    March 18th, 2009 at 06:44am
  • LoveTaRead

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    I think that Meggie and Keg should put roise up for adoption even though it is hard and then 16 years later have her move back with them. That would make a very big twist.
    March 18th, 2009 at 02:39am
  • not mohawks; robots

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    amaazzziinnng!
    :D
    March 18th, 2009 at 01:13am
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    ive been reading this story and the prequel for days and i finally caught up but I don't know if I am going to continue. I saw the whole story leaning toward kegan and maddie being together and now she's gonna end up with stupid tj. I don't really have anything against tj but I dont see him with maddiie at all. He should be with Lydia. I rather u kill maddie in the end than her end up with tj!! If she is with t.j that will ruin everything. She will have no friends except maybe Reagan and either will tj, she won't know how to raise a vamp so hes just gonna run wild and kill everyone and kegan will kill himself because he can't live without maddie. In the end you will just have a messed up story. I'll probably read the next chap and decide from there. And I'm not trying to bash your writing I just think it would be better if you went with kegan like in guessing you originally planned. It would flow way better because now she's just having these random thoughts she never had before about kegan and t j
    March 16th, 2009 at 11:24pm
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    Yay brilliant update, as always. It's nice to see T.J preying for them...including Kegan, shows he's a better person :)
    Still looking forward to the surprise ending, I have an inclining of what you might do...but I could be wrong...hmm...have to wait and see :)
    More when you can :)
    March 16th, 2009 at 01:05pm
  • predigree13

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    OMG. OMG I think I know who you will end it and it will be amazing. Well the ending will be amazing even if you dont end it like what I am thinking. I cant wait for the next story!!!!
    March 16th, 2009 at 04:02am
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    Oh I can't wait for the surprise ending...
    Is it wrong that I already prefer Autumn?
    Can't wait for more... :)
    March 15th, 2009 at 11:02pm