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  • Owlett

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    Heh. This is cute.
    Still a shock to me to have Brendon and William together. lolwat
    Also a shock to have Spencer with Hayley.

    But this is cute. c: I'll be waiting for updates as well. ♥
    September 11th, 2010 at 01:02am
  • demiixxlovee

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    I really like this story..
    Update!
    May 31st, 2009 at 08:40pm
  • See.

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    I really like this!
    Jon and William are kinda creepy, though...xD
    Update when you can?
    May 29th, 2009 at 09:56pm
  • brailey

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    CHAPTER 5
    So, like, I can never imagine Jon being gay. He seems like a strictly pussy dude. Soo, Brendon beats the shit out of people, eh? M'kay.

    CHAPTER 6
    William is such a douche. Is the Hayley in this story Hayley Williams or Spencer's real girlfriend Hayley?
    I <3 Gabe

    CHAPTER 7
    Brendon is such a sweetheart. Gosh, I love him. Haha, great line in describing the creative writing teacher.

    CHAPTER 8
    Expellation is never good (not that that's a word or anything). I'm such a jealous idiot. I'm jealous of Ryan and Brendon. TOO CUTE!! Haha, I love Brendon's lines towards her. Elf! That is too cool! Short people FTW!

    CHAPTER 9
    Wow. That's all I can say of the note. I'll bet Jon did it.

    CHAPTER 10
    Ooh, someone's a manipulative man. I love that he and Brendon was singing the whole time. I wonder what that harmonious sound sounded like. Maybe not so swell. I dunno if their voices would mix (so off-topic XD).

    CHAPTER 11
    Okay. So basically they were gonna do some consensual (NOT!) rape stuff with Ryan. Dude, you made Jon like evil. Poor them. Spencer is a life saver. Thank God for Mr. Smith.

    alright now, update soon!
    May 11th, 2009 at 05:32am
  • brailey

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    I'm like killing myself over chapter 4.
    Ahh, for some reason it's very funny.
    So now I know when I write my slash, intimate parts should be funny in my eyes.
    Haha, I love this story.
    I'm such a dork.
    May 11th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • XxMr.Ross-ReynoldsxX

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    Thank God Spencer stopped the whole thing!
    Stupid William, I hate him XP
    Can't wait till you update again :]
    April 15th, 2009 at 06:14am
  • rawrritsjess

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    Awesome update!!! Even though it was kind of fillerish. But it was still really good!
    April 14th, 2009 at 03:55am
  • ribcagemaybes

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    oh my O.o

    MORE PLEASE :S
    (:
    April 14th, 2009 at 02:02am
  • XxMr.Ross-ReynoldsxX

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    I love your story!
    Update soon?
    Please? :]
    April 11th, 2009 at 04:38am
  • FourtyTwo

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    That was fucking awesome <3

    I'm in love with your ryden
    April 2nd, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • white dude.

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    Get off F'N meez and write!
    March 11th, 2009 at 05:26pm
  • ribcagemaybes

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    layout=bad ass
    and story=amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    more plz
    February 10th, 2009 at 06:42am
  • xkaxpowx

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    hiffgbjkfbdvjhab.
    moreee more more more!
    February 10th, 2009 at 01:21am
  • xkaxpowx

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    this gets better and better.
    :]
    December 31st, 2008 at 03:50pm
  • ribcagemaybes

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    It couldn't have been Brendon......right?
    GAH! Cliffhanger again
    More, please.
    This is seriously an amazing story.
    I don't tell people this often but you're an amazing writer.
    (:
    December 28th, 2008 at 02:54am
  • ribcagemaybes

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    Updates -gasp- please!
    :D
    December 20th, 2008 at 02:00am
  • white dude.

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    i always find a way to read write women write
    December 19th, 2008 at 03:05am
  • sKwaird

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    This story puts a smile on my face.
    December 18th, 2008 at 08:26am
  • allie-friggin-tastic

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    OMG.
    Why are they getting expelled??
    *is in shock*
    OMG.
    Please update soon!
    December 14th, 2008 at 08:12pm
  • xkaxpowx

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    o0o0o
    expelled??

    crazy shit.
    December 14th, 2008 at 06:02pm
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