CHAPTER 5 So, like, I can never imagine Jon being gay. He seems like a strictly pussy dude. Soo, Brendon beats the shit out of people, eh? M'kay.
CHAPTER 6 William is such a douche. Is the Hayley in this story Hayley Williams or Spencer's real girlfriend Hayley? I <3 Gabe
CHAPTER 7 Brendon is such a sweetheart. Gosh, I love him. Haha, great line in describing the creative writing teacher.
CHAPTER 8 Expellation is never good (not that that's a word or anything). I'm such a jealous idiot. I'm jealous of Ryan and Brendon. TOO CUTE!! Haha, I love Brendon's lines towards her. Elf! That is too cool! Short people FTW!
CHAPTER 9 Wow. That's all I can say of the note. I'll bet Jon did it.
CHAPTER 10 Ooh, someone's a manipulative man. I love that he and Brendon was singing the whole time. I wonder what that harmonious sound sounded like. Maybe not so swell. I dunno if their voices would mix (so off-topic XD).
CHAPTER 11 Okay. So basically they were gonna do some consensual (NOT!) rape stuff with Ryan. Dude, you made Jon like evil. Poor them. Spencer is a life saver. Thank God for Mr. Smith.
I'm like killing myself over chapter 4. Ahh, for some reason it's very funny. So now I know when I write my slash, intimate parts should be funny in my eyes. Haha, I love this story. I'm such a dork.
It couldn't have been Brendon......right? GAH! Cliffhanger again More, please. This is seriously an amazing story. I don't tell people this often but you're an amazing writer. (:
Still a shock to me to have Brendon and William together. lolwat
Also a shock to have Spencer with Hayley.
But this is cute. c: I'll be waiting for updates as well. ♥