Calm and Quiet - Comments

Aw, that was beautiful.
I had tears in my eyes the entire time. It was just so cute. I seemed like a fairy tale or something. And I loved when Gerard shooed away the spider, it was just perfect.

This is perfect.

Aw, that was just what I was looking for. It was so filled with emotion and so beautiful. You did an amazing job with every single part of it. I especially loved when Gerard shouted at the spider, it was so heart breaking. I loved it.

That was amazing.
The way you just described their feelings and how you created the armosphere to be so sad and it was just those two in the cave.

That was amazing!:D

it so sad ;_; i didnt cry, but i was all AWWWWWWW oh noes...

Sruti, do you like making wifeys cry? :cry:

I wanna kill myself for not reading this earlier.

“Frankie, we have all the time we need. Just you and me.”

I kind of... burst. It was too overwhelming; their suffering and hopelessness, their serenity, their love... it was the definition of a beautiful disaster. Now you make me wanna play some Kelly Clarkson... haha.

Okay, I'm making jokes to ease the pain of this. You just wrote it so magnificently, you know?

IY wifey Even if you do make me .

that was incredible im really crying
your ebil!!! but that was so sad but amazing =)

Wow! Thank you all for your comments and your support!

I love logging in to find that I have new comments every day!

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wow, that was...amazing.
and sad.
i really feel for Gerard

that was beautiful, i loved it! made me all sad inside, but i can't cry over things like that, well i can, i'm making no sense so i'll quit while i can...great story!

wow that was great, hehe you got tears from me. You're good at writing *off to read your toehr stories*

Awwww...
*cries* That's so beautiful, and so sad...

aww. Thank you Emmy! :hug:

I-I Gimme a minute. *dry eyes*
Oh My. That was just ... too beautiful to describe.
I love your writing. Its so... powerful.

XoXo
Emmy

Haha. Awesome. I want to kill her too, but I've no clue who she is either! xD I just put it in there for effect and plotline, cuz there has to be a reason why Frankie's dying.

I love this.
I want to know who 'She' is.
And i want to kill her.
Slowly and panfully!
Poor Gee.
I really loved how you wrote it and kept the sadness there.
I also likes the way you describe things, like the leafs and everything,.
Truely beautiful!

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

wow, that was amazing!!! keep it up!!

Thank you, Nat. And I really wasn't mad at you. I was mad at myself and I still am because I can't accept a bad review. I feel really lame because I have trouble moving on and just sat there dwelling on it for 5 hours. But honestly, I'm not mad at you at all.

OK, so I read your journal and I feel I owe you an explaination.

Do not for one minute think I didnt like your story; you know I love everything you do and wish I had even a miniscule ounce of your talent. But you also know that Im saracastic and quite frankly, a bit odd.
I liked your story, I truly did, but Im not down with all that emotional stuff. As I was reading there was one part where you wrote about the animals around them. I kinda thought; what the hell is this Snow White?
Dunno, I just didnt see you as penning this kinda thing. I've read your other stories and I could see parts of you in the characters interactions, but this time, I didnt get that.
To end, I just didnt get it; I am cold inside. So suck up your first bad review since, like, ever and write another damn story!

me likey!!!!