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  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 06:06am
  • Ol' Blue Eyes.

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    More please, love. I hope you haven't abandoned this entirely.
    January 2nd, 2008 at 12:04pm
  • Inari

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    iATEjimmysWORLD:
    Your writing is the reason I get up in the morning, cupcake. It's just...it's perfect. I just went back and read the last ten chapters because it's just too good to walk away from.

    (And every time Amaya calls Pete Oompa I melt into a million pieces Tongue)

    I love you! xxx
    Gah! I think I officially love you more (is that actually possible? Just put it into this way, I love you so much right now I could disintegrate).

    Pete as an Oompa Loompa is such a sweet image.

    I love you too, honey.
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
    May 20th, 2007 at 04:44pm
  • Inari

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    Takingbackromance:
    That was a quick update. Lol.
    As soon as I finished the last chapter I started this one. I was on a roll.
    xo
    May 20th, 2007 at 04:43pm
  • iATEjimmysWORLD

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    Your writing is the reason I get up in the morning, cupcake. It's just...it's perfect. I just went back and read the last ten chapters because it's just too good to walk away from.

    (And every time Amaya calls Pete Oompa I melt into a million pieces Tongue)

    I love you! xxx
    May 20th, 2007 at 12:59am
  • monster carnival.

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    That was a quick update. Lol.
    May 18th, 2007 at 11:40pm
  • Inari

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    Takingbackromance:
    Oompa. Hehe.
    I'm sure if he ever read that, he'd hit me. Lol.
    May 18th, 2007 at 01:18pm
  • monster carnival.

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    Oompa. Hehe.
    May 18th, 2007 at 01:20am
  • Inari

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    Jolly McJollyson:
    You're pretty good, Inarl. I like it.
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    Thank you.
    April 21st, 2007 at 04:11pm
  • Jolly McJollyson

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    You're pretty good, Inarl. I like it.
    April 21st, 2007 at 12:03pm
  • Inari

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    SixtiesChild:
    This is so good but I really didnt want him to ask Jeanae to stay

    Its addictive and I've subscribed

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    Lol. Oh that's just a minor twist in comparison to what my mind is planning right now.

    I'm glad you liked it though, sweetheart.
    April 13th, 2007 at 05:17pm
  • Inari

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    iATEjimmysWORLD:
    Okay, so, somehow I missed a few chapters, but I've just read all through my lunch hour and caught up...and it's perfect. I want to kick Pete for telling her to stay, but I wouldn't have it any other way.

    You're the best.
    xxxx
    No, really, honey. You are.
    April 13th, 2007 at 05:16pm
  • Sixties-Child

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    This is so good but I really didnt want him to ask Jeanae to stay

    Its addictive and I've subscribed

    Clap
    April 12th, 2007 at 06:53pm
  • iATEjimmysWORLD

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    Okay, so, somehow I missed a few chapters, but I've just read all through my lunch hour and caught up...and it's perfect. I want to kick Pete for telling her to stay, but I wouldn't have it any other way.

    You're the best.
    xxxx
    April 12th, 2007 at 06:40pm
  • Inari

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    Takingbackromance:
    How is it possible for you to capture someone's emotions so well?

    I don't have to say anything about this chapter, except that I love it. Just like every other one.
    That means so much to me, sweetheart, because I seriously thought that I'd screwed this chapter up big time.
    April 10th, 2007 at 12:39am
  • monster carnival.

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    How is it possible for you to capture someone's emotions so well?

    I don't have to say anything about this chapter, except that I love it. Just like every other one.
    April 10th, 2007 at 12:15am
  • Inari

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    And I might just be speechless at that.

    Even if this comment doesn't suggest that.
    March 29th, 2007 at 11:33pm
  • monster carnival.

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    Weeelll, I might be doing just the same thing.
    March 29th, 2007 at 02:17am
  • Inari

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    You know, I think I fall in love with you a little bit more every day.
    March 24th, 2007 at 10:01pm
  • monster carnival.

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    Who would want to run away from you? Bastards. Ha.
    March 23rd, 2007 at 10:19pm
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