Wow.. I just... sorry, but... wow!! None of that was the closest to crap!! It was amazing, both of the chapters that I haven't commented on yet.
So, firstly, I really don't get how you can hate the first of the two, 'cause it was amazing and funny and sweet and i loved it!! So shush, woman!! It was fantastic, so hah!!
And the last one was amazing, too. I loved the way you ended every 'scene' the same way was brilliant, I really liked that!! It was sort of... poetic in a very... modern-ish way. Aaaaaand I do not have a clue what I'm on about anymore. Either way, I do know I loved it and it was really well done.
ok, you cannot write the word crap anywhere on the page, don't even think it- if you do i'll know, because you seem to have a talent in writing as you are constantly producing amazing works- without fail- every time you update.
anyway..... whats brown and sticky? a stick. what's warm, brown and sticky? a stick wearing a scarf. hehehehehehehe
Sorry I haven't commented in ages x] But I am now, on all the chapters I've missed x]
Okay, so it was really cute how Sean got so stressed out about Ian's birthday, wanting everything to be perfect (Strongly ignoring the consequences now.) and just... GAH! he should have one of those shirts that my friend has, that says it doesn't matter, it's just fun :]
I feel so bad for them fighting and I was glued to the screen all the time, And I'm actually really happy that I didn't have to suffer from one of them cliffhangers I hate so much *gleeful*
But despite the fight - which was horrible, plotwise, but amazingly written; I felt every word! - the resolution was amazing, just so, so, so sweet!!
The way you write is so brilliant, and you don't go off subject. You keep it together really well, and the story line and way everyone reacts is awesome! I love it! <3333 x
And the gift for Ian's mum was precious *cuddles again*
I love this story *cuddles some more*