Your stories great but I got to the 4th chapter and got super annoyed cause you used wayyyy too many times words such as ' then'. your telling a story not a timeline
and 'just' thats extremely annoying you don't have to say just..broaden your vocabulary it would make your story alot better.
Oh man, I was so behind on chapters! But I just read up to chapter 62. And I think I love this story! I almost cried when Joe and Erika found out that Johnny had SIDs. ...Stupid asshole of a doctor. :d I can't wait to see then end of this story...But I don't want it to go. :\ Hahah(; I'm so weird. :P Update soon? :D
OMG!!!!!!!! i have read both the prequel(sp?) and the sequal and i am in love with them!!!! they are amazing and usually i hate joe stories... but i love this one!!!
The common cold? Those doctors were idiots!! They better be suing. Johnny's first word was vagina? Haha, where the heck did that come from? A little sexy time at the end makes it all better ;)