As the Sparks Fade - Comments

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this is amazing
*cries*

If he had waited a day!!!!

A day!!!

And they both wouldve been happy!!

*cries*

Dang that left me speechless for a while. I feel really bad for Frank and the way he feels. Feeling unloved by the one he loves. And curse Gerard for his phone dieing. Curse him!
This is my second favortie one shot about MCR on mibba and defiently one of the best I've read!
Keep writing!

wow i've always loved frerard and this ain't the exception. is awesome well done. sorry is my comment can't be compared with those 3 you've already. I'm hungry! =)

keep writting.

Whoa, the way you described the feelings of Frank for Gerard, was just amazing. You nailed down every emotion amazingly. It was like I could feel what Frank was feeling. Your writing is amazing, and just wow.

The ending almost made me cry, my eyes were welding up with tears. But I held them in, because I'm surronded by people at a libary, how awkard would that be?? lol.

Anyways...the ending blew my mind. I was expecting Gerard to run into Frank's room and proclaim his love to him, but that didn't happen. The ending worked really well with the story, but I just didn't expect that Frank would kill himself so violently. Damn Gerard's phone for dying, if he would have charged it the night before, like any other normal person Frank would still be alive.

AHH this comment is super long, but this one-shot is my favorite one-shot on Mibba by far. Keep up the good owrk!!

Yay... I got to read this before anybody else *gloats*
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And as I said before, it was amazing.
Beautifully written, the emotions came through perfectly showing Frank's utter dispair and his determination at ending it all.
Very sad, expecially the voicemail - it was a nice touch, that "if only his phone hadn't died" things could have been a happy ending. Damn technology xD
So basically I want to marry you and all of your frerard. You rock <3
Love Beth
xoxo

:cry: Wow that was one intense one shot. The feeling of frankie have, loving gee secretly and killing him softly, make him hurt himself. You write this well, i just hope it was a happy ending but its okay the ending is beautiful kind of sadness.