This is great. As I said before, you're a truly powerful writer. I can clearly envision what's going on. I find your take on vampires very interesting. :)
kso, you posted the last chapter twice, justsoyouknow. I'm listening to Silverstein I'm a tacky commenter, deal with it. I like drugs. :weird. Oh, I like this story too, and feel loved about that because I don't usually read OFs. :con: Good work, babay
Okay. Yay! Time to be mean. No, I'm kidding Mr Nine-Percent. <---You have a hifenated last name! I like it. There was some confusing bits, where you babbled a little, or the words were too big. [Not that I don't understand big words, it's just that they were...clustered.] Remember children, big words don't equal emotion :weird
Brutally honest, aye? Nick, you're not very pretty, and you're not very bright [/cinderella story moment.] I'm kidding. You know that you're the only one for me, baby! :shifty I like stuff!