I read the whole thing in a span of three days. It was very good. Now I think you should end it at 20 and do a squel, 'cause longer than 20 is a little outragous and me personally I don't read stories that are longer than 20-30. And that would be a good ending at least you could go to Nick saying yes and the end of her party. I love it though!!!!!
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