Cliffhangers suck, lol! I love your descriptions, it makes the whole story come alive for me! I've got a picture of Niahm in my head, although finding out that she's 19, the picture seems a bit strange now. I pictured her, for some reason, as a younger girl, maybe pre-teens.
Dayum! *laughs* I love this story. I'm curious what the room and mirror were. I had a strange picture in my head of someone reaching out of the mirror and pulling him towards it. I can't wait to see where this goes next!! Update soon, please! :D
Thanks a million for your comments =) it's important to me that you like this story because I've written it with all my abilities joined together to work out a good tale xD now that I'm already finished, and that I'm already working on a sequel, and some new stories, I'm soooo much thankful to you guys =) this one is so wicked, and i hope you enjoy the way I've finished this and bla bla bla =P
It was fucking kick ass!!!!
YOU SHOULD SOOOOOOOOO DO A SEQUEL!!!!!!