Hello, Angel - Comments

This is a wonderful story; it quickly became one of my favourites. ^^
Chapter 11 isn't the end though...right? Just the way you said you A/N at the end made it sound so...final. I hope there is more to come. =]

GERARDDDDDDDD is retarded.
he seriously is.
he should not have gotten back together with katherine.
when i read about katherine, i seriously wanted to smack him in the head with a stick or something.
not cooooooool.
obviously he didn't cope well with sarah kinda hitting him in the face and her kinda turning him down.
thennnn. frankie and sarah make really good friends.
they're so funny together.
i wish my friends and i were like that lol
i must say that the party chapter was very well written, so good.
mikey was really random, with his comments on round things.
hahahahahahhahhaha, then i liked what sarah said about gerard being round and not pleasant :]
NOW, gerard just needs to dump kat and get with sarah haha.
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yay for updatesssss :]
wellllll.
i feel very bad for sarah.
especially since all her friends back home thought that she murdered her boyfriend
and the fact that she's considered a 'convict'.
no one derserves anyhing like that.
frank and sarah seem like they're going to be good friends :]]]]]] yay.
gerard got his nose brokennn :/
the description of gerard's nose was very good
cause i got a very good visual in my head of what it would look like if i saw it in real life.
i don't want to see it in real life cause then i'd be disgusted hahahaha.
we know that gerard likes sarah and now we know that sarah likes gerard too
BUT, the whole 'i'm sorry i kissed you' thing is totally going to be like AHHH.
haha. so I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. seriously :]
so far the story has been amazing.
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HEY. you never told me you had another gerard story up :]
but anyway.
i love this story so far.
i'd be mortified if my boyfriend had gone suicidal right in my face.
but i'm glad you didn't make her go all crazy [yet] and make her all emo with slicing up her wrists and stuff.
or maybe she does and i just don't know yet.
still, if you do; i won't mind, i'll still read :]
i liked it when sarah said 'you can call me a fucking angel for all i care' or something like that.
best line ever. besides 'why are you so serious'; but that's a different story hahaahah
i re-read that line like five times and smiled every single time.
when she punched gerard in the face, my face went like this :O
literally.
but poor little frankie has a crush on sarah.
though, he kinda/sorta has a date with her.
poor gerard :[
he got whacked in the face. but he kinda did surprise her.
gerard has to win sarah back, even though she does have that weird touching phobia.
but again i'm glad that she has a touching phobia rather than some other things ahahah.
i can't wait to read more :]
i'll subscribe tooooo.
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i'm on chapter three.

but.

NO INSULTATION OF THE BLONDES!!!

hahah. but i love this.

brilliant
I love it
I want more
and that's that
very talented indeed, which is saying alot compared to a lot of the people who can't write worth shit in this place, not even semi decently anymore.