And That Smile That You Give, To Me - Comments

This was amazing!
I have no idea why I've never clicked on it before...
But I'm glad I did today!!
Very well done. :]

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh.
Clearly, this is the best story I have ever read.
(:

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh.
Clearly, this is the best story I have ever read.
(:

:D
How is it that I've yet to read this until now?!
Darling, I believe that this is some of your best work yet. It was absolutely fabulous. You had me giggling, gasping, awwing and grinning the whole time!
Bravo

omffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffg.
i loved ittt XX)
specially the ending,it was sooo sweet lol.
yayy!!!!!!!! <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

*glomp*
:cute:

Oh my God, I love it! I laughed my ass off during some parts, screamed at Ryan and Jon during other parts, and nearly melted when Brendon finally kissed Ryan. :D You did a really nice job on this story.

that was a fabulous ending. the Ryan and Brendon part was adorable and the bet between Spencer and Jon as hilarious
<3

:lmfao that was mo-fuckin' hilarious! :XD
this was seriously an amazing short-story!!!! :mrgreen: :con: :yah :weird :cute: :pat:

Aww! I loved it!!!!

Wow, Jon's a hustler!!! lol!

Awww, definately amazing! The perfect ending.
The little bet was funny -- but I believe Jon did help, so he really shouldn't have won.

HAHA.
xD
Jon is so diabolical. I really liked this; too bad it's over. D:
Good job. :D:D:D

AWWW!!! AWESOME!

awh :D
so sad it's over but that was adorable.
"That was the worst kiss I've ever received, but the best for some reason."
that had me loling.

awh man!!!! that has to be the cutest short story I've ever read <3
and at the end bit, i totally thought that it was gonna go Joncer on us and that they would start kissing, but whatever, it was funny that they had a bet going XP
you know, i may just be thinking of another prompt soon-ish.... =]
loved it <3333 i'm actually confused to why it isn't on a ten star rating yet >.<

I really love this story so much.

I loved this story. Sad to see it go. Really nice work.

Lmao.
The bet between Spencer and Jon had me laughing.
I'm smiling like a retard right now cause I loved this so much hahaha.

haha jon is amazing. this story was sooo funny.
i love how jon seems to know everything and could control them all.

Aw!!!!
The ending was super cute, and you totally suprised me with the betting. I didn't see that one coming, haha.