Crawling Towards the Sun - Comments

  • natzlovesyou

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    I'm a little confused...when they say this is your room they're implying they've got such a big house they've given one to Layla?
    Was this right after the past chapter? Or the next day? If it was the same day then how come Damian knew about Layla?
    Slightly confused but nonetheless interested.
    September 19th, 2008 at 11:35pm
  • Slaughter Me Happy

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    Oooh! I love it, a lot!

    After the first chapter, what is the inspiration song?
    September 18th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • natzlovesyou

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    New background looks amazing!
    Update soon?
    September 17th, 2008 at 10:42pm
  • natzlovesyou

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    Humm I think this might get interesting. I'm subscribing.
    Although can I ask you a little favor? Is there some way you can change the background? 'cause after I finished reading and took my eyes away from the comp screen I was seeing color spots, and I think that's a bad sign.
    September 15th, 2008 at 03:11am
  • darknight

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    Awsome beginning. I love the shy people as main characters. Can't wait for next one!!
    September 13th, 2008 at 02:05am
  • iDomm

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    Awesome story. I hope Layla speaks louder soon. :]
    There was a lack of something, and I did see some punctuation mistakes.
    (I criticize every story, so I hope you don't take offence...)
    But it is a good story in general.

    Looking foward to some more,
    -Domm
    September 13th, 2008 at 12:14am