Curbside Confession - Comments

How do I exiplain the way I felt when I read the first chapter?? Honestly I can't, the comment above me said it all. That was very good for a first chapter. Even from the little describing of Frank's problem I can already guess what it is. And I love it. Gerard is obvisly concenred about of friend, and that is wonderful.

I must leave now and read the second chapter. This story deserves ever comment it can get.

-squeals-
How did I miss that you had posted this?

I friggin loved this the first time round that I read it, I think it's one of my favorite things you've ever written - which is saying a lot because I love everything you write =D

I did notice you changed things a little since you e-mailed it to me, but I think it's improved it - if it's possible to improve perfection xD

Gah - the plot, the characters the everything!
It's just superb.

Different to a lot of other frerards too, which is very refreshing to see - but I already know you're so original <3

I'm remembering just how much I loved your writing style, it's just so clear and lets the reader feel the emotions you're describing.

I expecially loved the line: "But still, uncertainty ate away at me like a parasite"

Lovely work.

Very, very nice, looking forward to reading more.
Love Beth
xoxo

I really like this! You should totally update soon :shifty:

/subscribed

Powerful.

Who was meant to be speaking at the end of the last chappie though?

i really like this so far, it seems fairly different then all the other ferards out there

ill be looking forward to more,
Hecate )O(

I'm impressed. And usually I'm not that impressed anymore with frerards and only stick to my favourite authors. But you've managed to blow me away with your writing and style. Well done.

I've just recently started a frerard where Frank is a little like the way you described him previously.

But anyway, well done mate. And I can't wait for more.

Great start.
Can't wait to read more. (:

Got me curious. .why did frankie feel that way? more soon. .

I really like this! Your writing is very great(with a few typos) but i definately want to know what happens next.