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  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    oh sis chapter 5 was sad and cute at the same time!!
    i cant wait for u to write more!!!
    October 11th, 2008 at 07:45am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    chapter 4 was the best out of all the chapters!!!
    it wass cute!!
    it sucks that they are homeless though
    was spencer selling his body for money???
    i couldnt tell!
    September 27th, 2008 at 12:38pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    wow this story is really sad!!! i cant wait to see when the other characters come in!!

    this is gonna be a great story so u need to update soon!!!!
    September 27th, 2008 at 12:32pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    chapter 2 was okay.
    it wasnt very exciting!!
    But we will see what happens
    September 27th, 2008 at 12:27pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    WOW i like this story already!!!
    plus Spencer,Keegan,And Aaron are fucking hot!!!!
    was Ted the one molesting spencer???/
    September 27th, 2008 at 12:23pm
  • Destined_Disaster

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    So far, I like it. It's a good idea and so far, you seem to kind of know what you're doing.
    One thing though, can you please watch your spelling and grammer? Just little things like putting "i" instead of "I" have a strange way of bugging me. I might just be a perfectionest but, still...I would really appriciate it if you did.
    I like the idea of two street kids looking after each other and falling in love. I'm really curious as to what will happen with the others.
    Please keep writing. I'll be waiting for the next update.
    September 21st, 2008 at 01:08am
  • xxLiz

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    i like this idea!..keep updating please?
    September 15th, 2008 at 12:14am
  • AndThenSheBled

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    seriously guys i need comments.
    i will stop updating until i get some Cry
    September 14th, 2008 at 08:40pm
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