Breath In - Comments

it was not shitty, it was good. I'm sorry that you're three weeks have been shitty, and horrible. But if it makes you feel any better, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter, and the chapter for curbside.

Keep up the good work, and if you ever need to talk just comment me. =)

This story is badass. More?

this is really good so far cant believe frank did that to gerard

I love it!

Gees really nice... Hehe

Poor frankie... And poor gee...

Update spoon!!

Whoohoo. I loved the chapter and the story. It's been awhile since I've read something so...whats the word?? Interesting! There we go. Ahh I love your stories they are all amazing. Update soon. I can't wait to see if Gerard tells Frankie about the cocaine!!

Ah, a new chapter.
It's been a long time since the last one.
It was a great chapter. You did fine. :)
What I don't like is the view-changing. I don't like that much. But I guess, I have to deal with it.^^
*sits here and waits for more*

MC 2u2!
a.k.a. Merry Christmas to you too )
Sub-ing, I can't wait for about five zillion more updates (don't worry, I don't want 'em all tonight)

*subscribes*
i like it..!

It's a beautiful chapter and I like it, much. It's a bit shorter than the others, but that doesn't matter, the content is great. :)
The beginning is my favorite...and the part, where Frank spoke out loud his thoughts - funny. :D
Really amazing!

GAAAH you go girl.
This is friggin' amazing.
I noticed you said you didn't like the voice of it, but in my opinion I think it really fits, helps make Frank's character a bit deeper if you understand what I'm getting at =]
Like, it shows that he is bitter about things and that he does care, but he puts all of his energy going about it the wrong way, but it tells us that he's not totally lost. =D

Blaaagh. I'm addicted to this story, ILY!
Beth
xoxo

----ohhhies----
I totally missed the fact that you'd posted this. *smacks head*

Well you already know that I adore this. I want to marry it and have it's babies.
The plot is perfect, very original and certainly interesting.

But I think my favorite thing would have to be your characters, mainly your characterization of Frank - he's got such an attitude, an outlook on life that is just so angry and non-caring at the same time.
The fact that you give him traits and a personality - not only makes it realistic but also allows the reader to relate to him at least in that sense. Maybe not the cocaine part xD

This sense of realism is simply boosted by your dialog and description, very nice work.
So yah I love it and I love you. =D
Beth
xoxo

P.S: Thank you so much for the dedication, it really means a lot to me *grins*

I like it. . a different one from your oneshots. . subcribes. .more soon. .

Uh, yeah, I have to say ShotgunSherri--'s right, it's hard to read. Maybe you could make it a little bit smaller?
Only if you want, of course...however, it would be nice. :)
This chapter was wow, just brilliant. Your chapters are very detailed, it's gorgeous.
Frank's cool. :XD
My favorite part this time was your description of the power fire can have over people.
Can't wait for more. :mrgreen:

Hey great story so far youve written it really well, just one thing i dont know about anyone else but i hate that font its so hard to read...

just my oppinion but other than the font this story seems awesome!!

=D

xx.x.x.x.

Uhh, that sounds really great :D
I'd like to read more. Would make me happy.
I like the way you write :)
My favorite part is the one where Frank deletes the numbers on his cell. I've got the same habit, kind of ^^