January 23rd, 2011 at 02:52am
Don't Go Out in the Woods Tonight... - Comments
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I love this. I barely finished reading the updates from the sequel. Just as amazing. But still, Troy :( this totally moved me and took a while for the tears to stop. Either I'm truely crazy or youre just that great of a writer. I'm pretty sure it's the later thought. :)August 11th, 2010 at 04:41am
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Wow this story is really good :) I can't wait to start on the sequel but I can't now cause I have and essay due tomorrow :( stupid school getting in the way of my reading *grumbles*December 14th, 2009 at 03:57am
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that is so hilarious!! in The "Look" when she´s like `You´re in denial` or the death glare of doom....laughing my butt off still^^September 30th, 2009 at 12:48pm
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hey^^just wanna say that I really like your story...but you might need to go back to the first chapter and edit them...there are some mistakes...like "muscles refuse to stop working"in chapter 4(I think)...I know that you mean ´muscles refuse to work´...I don´t mean to be mean(^^) there are just some rough mistakes that can be avoided, so it makes your story look more "professional"
but the pure story is really good : PSeptember 30th, 2009 at 11:20am -
Amber? I's been away for a very long time but I'm back now and all I have to say is WTF!? =0 Where did Troy go? Why did he leave? did he have a reason? Was it because Kate forgave Lyris? Is he still alive?
And Does it tell in the second one? I'mgoing to read right now!August 5th, 2009 at 04:09am -
please keep writing this story is really great one of the few that can keep me interested. love the characters. keep going your doing amazing.July 20th, 2009 at 07:11pm
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O.o!
Fall back in love with the story! =[
It's realllyyyy good and I really do love it <3
Its one of the stories that I really like here, and that I haven't stopped my interest =]
But I know what it feels like, but maybe you just need reminders, and things to spark your weiting.July 20th, 2009 at 02:43pm -
Okay, I just started reading this story like four hours ago...and I totally finished!...It is AMAZING!!!! I pray for a sequel!!! It can't end like that I go through that whole thing hoping they'll be together and then I get to the end....Well it was brilliant so, know that! :DJuly 20th, 2009 at 12:24pm
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Not how I thought it would end...at all.
I really liked the fight scene between Troy and Lyris though.
Well, it's more that I liked their thought processes. Very enjoyable to read.July 20th, 2009 at 09:28am -
Wahhh!
Dont end it like that =[
Luvved this story though..hoping youmake a sequelJuly 20th, 2009 at 08:58am -
Just read chapter 8, after finding this story tonight, and I'm really liking it. :DJuly 20th, 2009 at 06:41am
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Maybe I'm just dim, but what led up to him leaving?
I think the epilogue and last chapter were fairly unattached.
Which leads me to wonder if there will be a sequel? Because I am utterly lost.July 20th, 2009 at 04:17am -
Wah!
Im confuzzled!!!
Why would Troy leave when tehy both went through so much to get back to eachother? =*[
Is just friends with Lyris? I kinda like him so thats cool ^^
But she has to be with Troy TT_TTJuly 20th, 2009 at 04:13am -
i don't get it...why is she with lyris??? what the hell?!!!July 20th, 2009 at 03:36am
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Dude, what the hell?
I expected them to end up together.
And what's the deal with Lyris?
o.OJuly 20th, 2009 at 02:55am -
Oh, and I really really really can't wait for more...;)July 19th, 2009 at 08:47pm
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Uh, what a beauty!! <3
The story's great!! Needless to say more;)...
Keep it up!! *Note my tombs up!!;)*
See ya;)July 19th, 2009 at 08:47pm -
Cute scene in the car. I liked it.July 16th, 2009 at 08:34pm
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LOVE it!
Lyris is so adorable and caring... lol!
<3<3<3<3<3June 29th, 2009 at 08:20am
(there are quite a few mistakes in the writing though.. it makes it confusing in some places)