Hit the Lights, You'll Be Alright - Comments

  • Christelline

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    Amazingly written. I wonder how this would look in a series form. Like a part two where they see each other again after having moved on.
    July 4th, 2009 at 03:14am
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    Re-reading has made me smile :D
    Thank you for being such an amazing writer.
    Remember me when you're famous <3
    December 28th, 2008 at 12:23am
  • Shine Brighter;;

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    Wow, Dee. I'm absolutely amazed.That story is brilliant. You have to become an author one day. And you can count on me buying each and every one of your books.
    If they run out, I'll smack the last person who bought it. That's a promise that I want to keep.
    Your so amazing and I'm so trucking happy that we're rad together !!!!!!!! :DD <33
    October 18th, 2008 at 08:34pm
  • cupcakelovex3

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    I just had to read this over again.
    It's a brilliant masterpiece.
    I'm still kind of stunned by it really.
    "Please, darling. Don't cry. You'll be fine. You'll accept this and move on."
    Tears were already collected up on the brims of my eyes when I read that part again (Just like last time, heh. You got me at the same spot again, well actually...before that part this time around. :P)
    "Hit the lights, you'll be alright.
    Tonight our dreams come true."
    The title/those phrases, are pure gold.
    <3 Gah I love like like whoa, no words can explain how much.
    October 7th, 2008 at 12:36am
  • plug-in-baby

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    ahhhh! that was really really good. i wont lie-i LOVED it and im jealous bc it sso good. it was really cool how you made the ending sad, not wahat everybody wanted bc it made it realistic, how life would really go. people are like that, we're not strong so it was really rad how your writing showed that. also, the humor in the letter was very cute and it gave the story a lot of voice. it was just woooow-amazinggg!!! hahaha awesome., write more!

    <3Kelli
    September 16th, 2008 at 10:36pm
  • cupcakelovex3

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    Dee, I will say this again, your writing is incredible.
    It brought tears to my eyes.
    I can only imagine what would happen if you turned one of your one shots into a series.
    ASDFEDTREGSA too amazing for words.
    =]
    September 16th, 2008 at 03:57am