This is just a punk rock song - Comments

You do an ace job of painting the scene that I love so much.

Even as another year rolls by it's still in my head.

Ace one love.

That was.. really good, it's hard to say exactly how i feel.
I loved it, I can tell you that much

*sings*
This is just a punk rock song, written for the people who see something wrong!
I love that song, man.

Anyway, review time!
I love the way you describe things. It just sticks out from the bunch on here – seriously.
The imagery that it has is amazing. Poetic!
Gaaah I wish I could say more. It was just beautiful I'm speechless! I couldn't find a single thing wrong throughout the whole thing.

More people should read this. It can open eyes!

…but my dear fuck, will I really change the world?
^ I ask that question nearly every day. I never give up though, for hope that I will.
Man, both me and you are on the same vibe.

that was really good
the lack of diologue made it more meaningful and deep
if that makes sense

good job

This was very different, in a nice way.
I found a few things mispelled like:

drag of her ciggar

That should be "cigar"...I think.
I like the descriptions, I loved them in fact.
The lines were very quoatable...
You're a very good writer^^

Raven T.:

Very good

Very very awesome, yes..

Very good

maybe I havent considered it yet

wow its really good :]

continue!

wow

that was amazing

*speechless*

ohh I updated it now Its the real story
thanks

cool first chapter! Are you going to write more? Also, that song rules all. : ]