Well, now, Joe dear, seeing as I know owe both your and your dearest brother Jared a chapter of heartbreak rd I thought I might bide my time before I have to start writing by repaying the favour and reading your stories.
The concept confused me, but maybe that was because I was skim-reading, i dunno. And despite your telling me that there were cpoius spelling mistakes I couldn't spot any. Once again, could be because of my skim-reading.
But anyway, I liked the description and you have an interesting writing style although i may have to read your other story before I understand it. Otherwise it's very good.
wow that was really good. you had one word misspelled twice, but other than that, that was wow. wow. wow. wow. i didn't know you could write like that. you need to write more often. i would subscribe to everything you write if you would keep going. please keep going. i really like this story. will you keep going? please. please. please? other than that oh my goodness. the bomb. amazing. i loved it. keep writing. ♥---bexy penguin
The concept confused me, but maybe that was because I was skim-reading, i dunno. And despite your telling me that there were cpoius spelling mistakes I couldn't spot any. Once again, could be because of my skim-reading.
But anyway, I liked the description and you have an interesting writing style although i may have to read your other story before I understand it.
Otherwise it's very good.
-Kyla.
xoxox