sorry i haven't been commenting on every chapter, i was too busy wanting to read the next one straight away. this is really good, i'm enjoying it so much! i couldn't wait to get home this evening to read the next bit. you both write really well, apart from occasionally changing person and slipping into 'my', but it's a minor detail, nothing a quick proof read can't solve. i can't fault the actual content of your writing at all, it reads so well and i'm really there with the characters - you've got mikey and gee down to a tee (hey i made a rhyme). and i think it's fair to say that stripper!mikey is going to go down well in anyone's books - that bitch sure can work the pole. and the image of him in leather trousers... ahem, g'night everyone, cough. so yeah, excellent work, i really can't wait for the next chapter!
May 25th, 2010 at 08:31pm