Lips of Deceit - Comments

OMG I just finished reading this today and it was just absolutely AMAZING!!!! I was tearing up at the end! I wish there were more stories of this quality on here. I seriously about died reading this! Just f*cking AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

Okay, a couple of things. I hate you, you made me cry at the very end!!! LOL I really don't hate you. But another thing, when Ava want fries to dip in her frosty, I laughed so hard because I eat that like fries and ketchup!!! I wasn't even pregnant then. I still do it and my bf still shakes his head at me. Second, I love Fast Melodic in a non creepy way!!! Her stories are the bomb and are my favs!!! Third, I know this is prbably late for commenting but I just found your story this evening. Oh, and I love the way you write! The last chapter literally shot little pains in my chest as I was reading. Sad because she died, but I'm guessing she was gonna choose Brian anyways.

I started reading it today and finished!! I was crying so hard at the end. In the end is picked Brian, which Im glad for. Even if... she most likely didnt deserve him... or Matt.
This is definitely my favorite story on Mibba so far!!

ok so ya, i didnt commen thru the whole story but i am now, and HOLY SHIT this story had me laughin, cryin, pissed off... but wow.. just wow.. that was really good!

Ahhh, I just started reading this yesterday, and I'm done. =) I loved it but... YOU MADE ME CRY IN THE LAST CHAPTER! But nonetheless, it was a good ending haha =)

Oh holy shit!
I was laughing my ass off reading over all the comments I left before!
I saw like a maniac in a lot of them, hahah!

But I also read this story over again! It's still my favoritest story in the world! I got so into it, it's crazy!

One last time:

TEAM BRIAN RULES THE FUCKING WORLD!
WOOOOO!

:mrgreen:

This is still my favorite story on Mibba, ever!

Sad ending.
I know a story where the other said she didn't know but she'd decide by the end, and the readers turned it into a bit of a competition.
Plus of course there are people who say team whoever, but they really have no say.
If I find anything I'll tell you. Sorry it took me so long to read the end.

sugapie63:

hey, um i know this story means alot to you and like i've told you before i absolutely loved it, but there are other stories that have had the team brian/team matt thing going on before this story was written, or at the very least before i found it. so i don't know if you mean formal teams or just people talking about which "team" they're on, as in who they want to get the girl, but I can pretty much guarantee you that no one has deliberately stolen that idea from you or Ali. And if they did get the idea from you it wasn't malicious, and the way their story is/was going inspired people to say they're on team so and so or whatever. So i just wanted to say, don't get too bent out of shape over this because it's really not a big deal, not to undermine your feelings or anything, and if these people really did deliberately steal from your story then they just did it because they know their story sucks in comparison to this one. just wanted to give you my opinion, not that you care but yeah. and like i said before this story was truly fantastic, as i've already told you. <333

x.Kris.x:

Um, not to be rude or anything, but I think that last note was a little out of line. Don't get me wrong, I loved your story (clearly, I read it all the way through and commented all the time), but I don't really think you have a right to be that upset over other people having Team Matt/Team Brian ideas. There are a lot of stories with Matt and Brian fighting, and I don't think you can patent that. It's just a natural reaction to pick sides. Hell, one of my close friends on this site had a story up way before this one started with a girl trying to choose between Matt and Brian. She even chose out colours for each team to have! So I think it's ridiculous to just assume that you can get angry for those.

I will, however, give you credit for the main ideas in this story. You have every right to be angry and bitchy if someone steals the details from this story. I just think you need to tone it down when it comes to the other things. That's all.

Thanks, Kris and Sugapie...... I appreciate you both saying what you just did.

I loved this story all the way through. I seriously have. I was hooked from Chapter 1 to the end until I reached the last Author's note. Then I got a little pissy myself.

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My dear Team Brian captain Ali has just informed me that there are stories that have started having Team Matt/Team Brian like this one did. NOT COOL! That is something that Ali started and I upheld and expanded it to all of you....But Team Matt/Team Brian is something only to be found in this story!

I, however, am one of those people who just so happens to have a Team Matt/Team Brian story up. The title is Almost Easy and I started posting it in June of last year. My teams were known as Team Gates and Team Sanders/Shadows, so different but still along the same concept. I was asked by my lovely readers to choose colors so we did that, too. I can't pinpoint the exact date that the teams started, but colors were chosen in Chapter 67 which was posted on 6/22/08. Team Gates was purple of course, Team Sanders/Shadows was red.

Like some others have said, choosing Teams between Matt and Brian are not uncommon, I've read other stories were the main character is torn between both men. How could a girl not be, really? But, that's all beside the point. When I was reading this story, I did not in the least become offended that someone else had Teams. Seriously. Is there a point in getting offended over it? No. It happens, and to tell the truth we all don't read each other's stories and start stealing plots and ideas...it's not possible to do so. I've read other stories that are similar to my four-parter (Almost Easy was the second in the series and I'm still posting the fourth) and I haven't decided I wanted justice.

Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. Just think of it that way, even though YES it does tend to get your goat when someone can't think of something of their own.

Um, not to be rude or anything, but I think that last note was a little out of line. Don't get me wrong, I loved your story (clearly, I read it all the way through and commented all the time), but I don't really think you have a right to be that upset over other people having Team Matt/Team Brian ideas. There are a lot of stories with Matt and Brian fighting, and I don't think you can patent that. It's just a natural reaction to pick sides. Hell, one of my close friends on this site had a story up way before this one started with a girl trying to choose between Matt and Brian. She even chose out colours for each team to have! So I think it's ridiculous to just assume that you can get angry for those.

I will, however, give you credit for the main ideas in this story. You have every right to be angry and bitchy if someone steals the details from this story. I just think you need to tone it down when it comes to the other things. That's all.

I've seen some stories like that!
I'll give you names next time I see them =]

I totally loved your idea about the teams and I wouldn't take it from you, ESPECIALLY without asking...you're actually one of my fave writers...
I hope you figure it all out, good luck hun!!

i pretty much agree with sugapie63 it just happens you know the commenting things. i would be pissed off if someone stole your plot line. and far as I know no one has.

hey, um i know this story means alot to you and like i've told you before i absolutely loved it, but there are other stories that have had the team brian/team matt thing going on before this story was written, or at the very least before i found it. so i don't know if you mean formal teams or just people talking about which "team" they're on, as in who they want to get the girl, but I can pretty much guarantee you that no one has deliberately stolen that idea from you or Ali. And if they did get the idea from you it wasn't malicious, and the way their story is/was going inspired people to say they're on team so and so or whatever. So i just wanted to say, don't get too bent out of shape over this because it's really not a big deal, not to undermine your feelings or anything, and if these people really did deliberately steal from your story then they just did it because they know their story sucks in comparison to this one. just wanted to give you my opinion, not that you care but yeah. and like i said before this story was truly fantastic, as i've already told you. <333

ohmygod this story was amazing.
i cried in some parts.
it was that good.
I never cry!
the story was so real!
it's sad that she died and that the baby is Brian's.
I was kinda on Team Matt.
Amazing, seriously great job on it.
It definatly deserves 10 stars
btw, i don't think you should make a sequel. There really isn't a point for it
since Ava's dead and she was kinda the main character of the story..

a sequel would be lovely!!

holy shit! i'm tearing up!!! That was so sad! this story is amazing! x] It's gotta be one of my favs! <33

Im a lot late on this but I like this story
I totally would've been on Team Brian

I seriously loved this story!
I wish it hadn't ended.
:P

Bri Bri Sexy Time:

The Jesster:

Sooo......now what do we do?

I guess sit here with our thumbs up our ass? *Shrugs*

XD I didn't want to picture that, but my brain did DX