Zack's Daughter - Comments, page 3

Sailor Meranda (100)

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Agrees with xXvengeance.loveXx uh oh, mortals? Cussing in front of humans? Wonders what that means? : )
Loved the update though.

October 15th, 2008 at 04:40am

xXvengeance.loveXx (100)

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ut oh! mortals? what does that mean?

good job, can't wait for more!

October 11th, 2008 at 02:26am

Sailor Meranda (100)

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I like it, it's cute.

October 9th, 2008 at 07:53am

Someday; (100)

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i luff it so far

September 24th, 2008 at 06:06am

Trigger (100)

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i love this so far. yup and its only the second chapter. anyway, please fix your grammar and spelling. i think it's called SPELL CHECK xDD hahah anyway, i only want to help so please dont be offended. anyway, also can you indent on the quotes and please make some sort of sign saying who says what cause i was pretty confused. please and thank you. otherwise, LOVE IT! *subscribes*

September 24th, 2008 at 04:18am

just gone okay (100)

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I luff it!
Continue, pweez?
The only thing you could do to improve it is to separate some sentences.
Other than that, it's luff-leeeee!

September 24th, 2008 at 02:17am