Chapter 3: Excellent yet again. I wouldn't ever normally think that drug taking could be romantic, but, you've made it seem that way. That's powerful writing hun. Well done; superb!
September 19th, 2008 at 04:19pm
Silver Isn't a Real Color - Comments
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Chapter Two: OMFG, WOW! You're writing is so rich and sultry; you write lust/love so well. Just an absolute pleasure to read. Oh, and I was 19 when I met my husband (he was 28 at the time), so I know a bit about age difference. You've just really captured my imagination with this story. If this were an actual book, I wouldn't be able to put it down.September 19th, 2008 at 04:10pm
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Seriously AMAZING! I absolutely adore the introduction to this story; so beautifully written. I had this feeling in my gut that the first chapter wouldn't be anywhere as good. Oh, how wrong I was! This is one of the best starts to a story that I've read here on Mibba. The chemistry between the River and Victoria is conveyed so well. You've just written it perfectly. I look forward to reading a lot more and I am definitely subscribing!
Excellent stuff.September 19th, 2008 at 03:48pm -
Comments = love.September 19th, 2008 at 03:31pm
