You Saved Me - Comments

Oh. My. God. My heart was beating so fast. Awesome suspense! I need to take lessons.

Gosh...I hope Bobby is an agent and he was wearing a bullet proof vest and it just knocked him out. I will be so sad if he's dead. And so sad if Gables isn't.

Eek! I just...wow! You're an awesome writer. I can't wait to see the aftermath...and Joe's reaction!

Oh my gosh Oh my gosh !!!!!
Such an awesome update :D
Yay Gables is dead, the truth is coming out, Joe and Brittany are going to get together again ....... is there a sequel??

This story rocks!

Wow! The latest chapter is I mean Wow. I can't wait for more. Wow! Wow!

More!
More!
:)

I-oh-WHOA!

Oh my gosh, I really didn't see that coming. Well I saw Gables coming, but not like that, and I, whoa. Holy shit that was intense, astounding, words can seriously not describe how amazing this chapter was.

I am completely speechless from it. And that's in a good way.

I-remarkable Stephanie. Seriously, that just, that....whoa.

I'm so happy that Gables got shot, and hopefully he's gone for good, and Brittany can go on with her life.
But it's incredibly sad that Bobby got shot. However you never actually fully stated where he got shot, so it might not be life threatening. Hopefully not.

Stephanie, you are such an amazing writer. That chapter was perfect, and nobody else would be able to write something like that. Nobody but you. Jeeze I have goosebumps from it, and my heart skipped a beat when I read about Brittany hearing the door open and close and the footsteps.
I'm so happy that Bobby had a gun on him. When he reached for his back pocket I imagined James Bond and started to hum the theme song, even though it wasn't an appropriate time. And I loved the random gun in her closet.

To put it simple, I absolutely 100% loved the chapter.

-Hil-izzle! the one half Team Bam!-izzle!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH
i so did not see that coming this chapter
holy shiznit
so amazing!!!
and i really don't want bobby to die either!

OH MY GOD! YES YES YES YES YES!!!! GABLES IS DEAD!!!!! :D Or is he?

UPDATE!!!!!! i'm begging you!!!!

Friggin AMAZING!!!!! please post the next one soon, and please don't kill bobby....

i loved the new update :D

O.O......i dont want bobby to dieeeeeeee ....i like this chapter

O.O......i dont want bobby to dieeeeeeee ....i like this chapter

OMG!!!! i got scared reading this chapter lol....i LOVED IT!!!! please please PLEASE!!! update soon!!!! i want to see what happens next!!!

oh. my. fuckin. god.
thats all i can write right now.
wow.
i can't believe bobby died.
please let like joe come and save her or something.
oh. my. god.

this story HELLAAAA reminds me of the movie Prom Night, but this is waaay better than that stupid movie, since the movie didnt have joe-freakin-jonas.
heheheee
ANYWAYYSSS what im trying to say is..
i really like your story.
=)

That. Was. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AH!
OMG!
AHHA!
More...More...please more?

AHHHHHHHH
thank you so much for updating!
i was dying from suspense!!! :D
AND THIS IS VERY SUSPENSFUL :D

Wow. You have a really good story going here. Luckily I'm all caught up on it though, so I don't have to miss anymore sleep by reading chapter after chapter in one night. I guess I'll just have to painfully wait for another update. It's ok though. It's definitely worth it.

Anyways. You're story IS amazing. I don't normally subscribe to stories because if I have to wait a week or two for another chapter I usually get over it. But this story is different, and I'm glad I subscribed. You have an well thought-out plot, lovable characters, and attention-demanding dialogue.

This is fun. I feel like some sort of book reviewer. But everything I said is true! Keep writing!

Okay, so I loved that he pushed her up against the lockers and made out with her. And that he left a little note in her locker. Awwww! I want a Joe. :(

And I. can't. believe. she. told. him. she . loved. him! That is so exciting! Obviously, I wish she could be open and sincere about it. Like that they could be together when she said it and that she didn't have to lie and say that she wanted him to give up his dream for her. That makes me sad whenever it's mentioned. She has got to respond to him before the four days are over. And I hope that Gables strikes soon so that they can finally be together.

Oh my gosh, oh my goodness. I absolutely love the update.
I have a list of things I want to get at. lmao "Lama!"

Okay so first things first.
The random making out in the hallways? Totally hot. And it was so cute how he left the notes in her locker. Aw, makes me want a guy who would have done that to me in high school. lol
Ah! She told him she loved him. You could totally tell that she does, but having her say it out loud, that was...remarkable. I loved how she just ran away afterwards, haha I probably would have done the same thing.
Floopy? I definitely love that word now. The first time I read it I was like "Floppy?" but then I reread it and started hysterically laughing. It reminded me of when we make words up while talking to each other. lol Floopy, I'm still laughing.

And then there was the part when Bobby called her "My girl". That was so entirely cute. He's like the perfect father figure for her, too bad he can't adopt her. lol But it was a heartwarming moment.

Every single chapter that you write becomes a favorite of mine. I can't just pick and choose. You're amazaling. And this comment is getting really long, like our profile comments and messages. lmao "Lama!"

-Hil-izzle muh comizzle