October 17th, 2008 at 10:12pm
I just read your whole story and...wow. I love it! I thought the whole W.P.P thing was very creative and original. I love the way Joe and Brittany are together...they're just too cute. I really liked how you had him be the only one to call her by her real name...and then Steph, which was really nice too. I was so relieved when she told someone her secrets.
Oh, and the Ninja Turtles? So adorable!! I loved that! I like how Joe and Brittany tease each other and their chemistry.
Oh, and I loved the nap...awwwwww! I can't wait for the next chapter...so hurry!!! Lol.
Awesome! Great job...great writing...great. Just great.
Favorite part of the entire chapter?
“Cuz I didn’t want to stay and practice my parts with Rose. She might…try stuff.” he said while he spazzed out a little bit at the thought of him and Rose dancing together crossed his mind."
That was hilarious, I started laughing when I read that because I could actually picture Joe spazzing. And the picture wasn't pretty, but funny nonetheless.
The almost kiss...grr I've been waiting for that to happen and then when the bell rang I literally yelled out "No!" and scared my dog half to death.
I can't wait for your next update!!!! :D