Caught up Between Two Loves - Comments

Please don't take this the wrong way but I feel like this story lacks major plot and character development. There should be more descriptions about the characters (especially the main character) and you should have someone read the chapters before they're posted because the syntax right now makes the story hard to understand. You have a wonderful idea for the a story and I'm not trying to discourage you at all, but the story feels more like a skeleton than an actual full body. The first chapter was really rushed and I felt like you cluttered way too many events in one chapter. Again I'm not trying to discourage you I just feel like this story has the potential to be so much better than it actually is.

OMGG there needs to be a sequel! .-. that was so cute i was almost crying with herr :D

I loved the series and would love a sequal just as much!

I love this, and I would LOVE a sequel

Awesome! I absolutely loved this entire story!!!!! just one little side note "Spain had one" might want to change that to "won" :)

loved it :) is he going to propose? ;)

Love the update honey

Tch now I wanna know what Fernando has planned if he scored in the Euro Cup. lol It was cute how they finally have time for themselves.

In the words of Apple, iLove. :D

awww poor nani. Ciao go Fernando. nando is such a dirty man even though I didn't know what he said i bet it was. lol can't wait for the next one

*something*

Love it. Nando needs to do semothing, and real quick

Love love loveeee :) like I said before,nando needs to ask her to Marry him,and quick! ;)

I love this :) making me hate on cris though, oh well! Her and Fernando need to get engaged ASAP! They're super adorable together!

as long as she stays with Nando, i'm happy x)
Next please

Lovedddd it :) Get fernando to move to man.u ;)
update soon?

wheyyy torres sure showed cris! ;)
i love thisss! update soon?

WOOOW Go Torres! xD

I smell DRAMA ^ ^

hey, ;)
you're a good writer. I'm really enjoying the story. I hoped that she would decline the offer, which she did YAY ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter
hope that you update soon
Love.