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  • StiltzScreamsRemedy

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    I read the first chapter, it's really good so far...
    But there is some grammar and word placing errors so it's like @_@ You should have someone proofread it for you and make sure, cause if there wasn't a lot of those errors... Your story would be bombtastic :D
    December 21st, 2010 at 07:44pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I loved the update!!! I can't believe it's over though. I liked the ending. It was sad, but I'm glad Ashley is finally free.

    You did an AMAZING job, hun.

    Sequel, please?
    February 16th, 2009 at 03:49am
  • Lost Cause

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    I love it when Ashley runs away, even though it never lasts for long. lol.

    Coming to an end? I guess it's okay as long as there's a sequel XD
    February 9th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • dreamanotherdream

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    No he's took the babies!

    Great Update. :)
    February 3rd, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I loved the update!

    I got a little worried when the Ace dude showed up, but then Joker killed him. Now I'm pissed at Joker! Why can't Ashley just keep them?

    I can't wait for the next one!
    January 31st, 2009 at 03:44pm
  • Gxradxway

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    This is really good! Keep up the great effort!
    January 31st, 2009 at 03:37pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I like Blade. The Joker's hideout is an unlikely place to make friends, but anything's possible, right? And she let Joker kill him! I can't blame her. I would have let him too.

    I LOVED THE UPDATE!!!
    January 22nd, 2009 at 01:44am
  • dreamanotherdream

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    Great update!
    Can't believe Ashley actually let him kill.
    January 21st, 2009 at 05:56pm
  • Lost Cause

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    He can't kill Tommy! He better be a man of his word. Who will she give him to? Hmm...I'm betting on Bruce and Alfred, but I could be wrong.

    I loved the update, hun!!!!
    January 13th, 2009 at 01:21am
  • dreamanotherdream

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    Eek, she shouldn't trust him!
    Great chapter 35.
    January 9th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • dreamanotherdream

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    OO another twist.
    More please!
    January 7th, 2009 at 02:25pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I loved the update! I still can't believe she married Bruce. Hmm...I wonder what's gonna happen now that Jokie's back in town.
    January 3rd, 2009 at 02:20am
  • nerdyhillbilly

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    what a great chapter! i still CAN NOT wait to find out who the father is. and, i though that she almost lost the baby. great work, can't wait til the next one.
    December 24th, 2008 at 04:00pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I loved the update!!! And I know the Joker is one sick puppy, but would he really kill his own kid? (Because I think it's Joker's, not Bruce's). I can't wait to read more!
    December 23rd, 2008 at 05:42pm
  • Draconia

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    Wow - great update! This story has got so many twists and turns I just don't know what to expect next.
    December 21st, 2008 at 04:38pm
  • nerdyhillbilly

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    just read tha latest chapter and holy crap she's pregnant! with who though?? i can't wait fo find out. great story. can't wait for the next chapter!

    =]
    December 19th, 2008 at 03:54pm
  • dreamanotherdream

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    Pregnant? Eeek!
    December 16th, 2008 at 05:44pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I loved the update! I can't believe Ashley's pregnant... I can't wait to see what happens next, but I understand if it takes a while. School can be harsh.
    December 16th, 2008 at 12:13am
  • Draconia

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    This story is really getting twisted. I loved it. You really capture the brilliant madness that is the Joker.
    December 12th, 2008 at 07:48am
  • dreamanotherdream

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    I thought Lucius was gone!
    Good updates.
    December 9th, 2008 at 09:34pm
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