Homepage › Stories › Changes › Comments

Changes - Comments

  • black_like_my_coffee

    black_like_my_coffee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    omg
    i just read it all at once and just wow
    i need this to be updated!
    i love love love this story!
    April 25th, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • allie-friggin-tastic

    allie-friggin-tastic (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Gee hit Mikey?
    =[
    I think Frank should kick his ass. xD
    lol.

    I love it.
    Can't wait for more!
    February 16th, 2009 at 06:43pm
  • Alice Verney

    Alice Verney (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    cue update
    February 16th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • Alice Verney

    Alice Verney (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    poor mikey
    July 28th, 2008 at 05:51pm
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

    Catastrophic Corie;; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    That was really good.
    I liked it I mean very well
    Writen!
    MOREEEEEEEEEEE
    July 15th, 2008 at 07:34pm
  • Blank Canvas.

    Blank Canvas. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    God Gerard, stop being an ass and go play with Frankie and Mikey!
    x3
    July 14th, 2008 at 07:36pm
  • sullen riot.

    sullen riot. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    This was really a refreshing change from all those typical high school MCR slash fics out there. I love the tone in which you write in – relaxed, with humor, but also with emotion. I can definitely see this story going a long way, both in plot development and emotional development of your characters. You really fleshed them out a lot, and came to life in the story with your dialog.

    Here are some things that I particularly liked:

    1.I liked how you thought everything through in your stories – there weren't any OOC situations, and you dropped little details here and there (for example, of Gerard's drinking) that I loved.

    2.My favorite part of the story by far, was the second half of Chapter 4. I can really sense the plot starting to move forward, and it was a scene with such emotion. I just wanna slap some sense in Gerard – Mikey only really wants to please his brother, it's breaking my heart here. Smiley

    3.The love triangle...thing. D: Can drama get any better? Mikey wants Frank. Frank wants Gerard. Gerard wants his booze, and his art, and he's shutting himself off from the world. I also love the addition of Ray in Chapter 2.

    4.The love between Mikey and Frank. It's just so frigging sweet, and Frank sighed quietly and snuggled closer to his best friend. This was what nothing would ever change. This, to have Mikey wrapped around him protectively, was what gave Frank hope and happiness. He was small, he was easily hurt. But he knew as the room filled with the deep breathing of slumber, that Mikey would make sure he was never hurt. is probably my favorite part of your entire story.

    Overall, I loved this. You've got a really unique style of writing that sets you apart, and I love it. It's high school without being cliche, it's emotional without being too melodramatic and angsty. It's addicting, too – I'm definitely subscribing.
    July 14th, 2008 at 07:31pm
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    !!!
    Sruti, I told you this a million times
    But oh God,
    Its so good.
    It's so good and I'm dying for January.
    PLANNING TIME!
    July 11th, 2008 at 04:35am
  • allie-friggin-tastic

    allie-friggin-tastic (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    once in two months is better than never!
    I can't wait for more!
    July 10th, 2008 at 09:32pm
  • ialoosa

    ialoosa (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    write more, yeah?

    :)
    March 12th, 2008 at 08:59pm
  • Astro.Zombie

    Astro.Zombie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Aw! I love this story In Love will there be more soon?
    August 22nd, 2007 at 07:43pm
  • The Way

    The Way (1400)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    17
    Location:
    Philippines
    The car ride was very, very amusing, and you got their characters so well! Like I can actually imagine the scene playing in my head: Frankie being hyper, Mikey fighting back, and Gee being all annoyed. There was minimal romance here, but it was a nice change of mood from the previous chapter. ;)
    June 26th, 2007 at 05:44pm
  • allie-friggin-tastic

    allie-friggin-tastic (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    gerard don't lie... you know you liked having frankie pushed up against you... *giggles*

    more soon?
    June 24th, 2007 at 07:17am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

    EwiesitsTabbie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I love it.
    June 23rd, 2007 at 03:27pm
  • Daylight's Death

    Daylight's Death (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    aww, that chapter was so cute!

    i feel sorry for mikey though. frank should like him. i would.

    UPDATE SOOOOON!!!
    June 23rd, 2007 at 06:11am
  • XMy_brutal_romanceX

    XMy_brutal_romanceX (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    kwl update XD more soon?
    June 22nd, 2007 at 09:05pm
  • Mike Dirnt.

    Mike Dirnt. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    He does look like Frankie!

    Also, do not blame the feather. Hmph.
    June 22nd, 2007 at 06:21pm
  • Bastard Son.

    Bastard Son. (200)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    Croatia
    Ahahaha. Ha. Smiley - Doesn't he look like Frankie? XD

    This update made me happy, made me chuckle AND also made me worried in a way. But just a slight bit. God, that feather was hilarious. Pink feather, Frank? Gay much? XDD
    June 22nd, 2007 at 06:10pm
  • Blank Canvas.

    Blank Canvas. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    LOL I love this story now! I soooooo wouldn't mind being stuck in a car with any of the MCR boys.
    June 22nd, 2007 at 04:47pm
  • Ding-Fries-Are-Done!

    Ding-Fries-Are-Done! (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    aaaawwwwww poor poor Frankie
    I wanna give him a hug
    Great story!!
    PM me when more =D
    June 21st, 2007 at 11:54am
Homepage › Stories › Changes › Comments